专项练习(二十二) 短文改错
Test 1
[2019·陕西省第二次联考]I am a person who always has a smile in my face. I don't like to be sad at any giving point in time. Whenever I came across any difficulties in my life, I get worried for a few minute as I am a human being and I have feelings, too. But again, I will tell one thing to me — life is short and you shouldn't waste time being sad, so just to cheer up. You are the one which needs to face the trouble. Wherever it is, you have to try to solve it. Be brave and accept the challenge with a smile or you will feel it was such small thing.
答案与解析：
I am a person who always has a smile in my face. I don't like to be sad at
①onany giving point in time. Whenever I came across any difficulties in my life,
②given③comeI get worried for a few minute as I am a human being and I have feelings, too.
④minutesBut again, I will tell one thing to me — life is short and you shouldn't waste
⑤myselftime being sad, so just to cheer up. You are the one which needs to face the
⑥⑦that/whotrouble. Wherever it is, you have to try to solve it. Be brave and accept the
⑧Whateverchallenge with a smile or you will feel it was such ∧ small thing.
⑨and⑩a
①in改为on 作地点介词时，in意为“在……内”，on意为“在……上面”，笑容应是展现在脸上，故将in改为on。
②giving改为given 分析句子成分可知，此处在句中作定语，修饰限定point，given在此为形容词，意为“指定的，特定的”；at any given point in time意为“在任何特定的时间点”，符合语境，故将giving改为given。
③came改为come 根据语境可知，此处在描述个人性格特点，应用一般现在时，故将came改为come。
④minute改为minutes minute为可数名词，其前有a few修饰，应用复数形式，故将minute改为minutes。
⑤me改为myself 根据语境可知，此处表示“我会告诉我自己一件事情”，谓语will tell的主语和宾语同指一人，此处的宾语应用反身代词myself，故将me改为myself。
⑥删除to so表示“因此”时，为连词，后面应是完整的句子，to do不定式不能构成
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完整的句子，因此应删除to，构成祈使句，故删除to。
⑦which改为that/who 此处为定语从句，先行词为不定代词one，修饰不定代词时，引导词只能用that，不用which，又因为先行词在这里指人，也可用who，故将which改为that/who。
⑧Wherever改为Whatever wherever在从句中充当状语，whatever充当主语、宾语或表语，分析句子成分可知，此处缺少is的表语，故将Wherever改为Whatever。
⑨or改为and “祈使句＋and/or/otherwise＋陈述句”为固定句式，当表示动作顺承时，用and连接；表示转折时，用or/otherwise连接。根据语境及句意可知，此处表示顺承，故将or改为and。
⑩在small前加a thing为可数名词，单数形式前应用不定冠词，such a small thing指“如此小的一件事”，故在small前加a。
Test 2
[2019·安徽安庆二模]Last weekend I went fishing with my cousins by a river, where was two miles away from my home by bike. When we were about to return for home, we found one of our bike lost. We were really nervous then. Asking about the lost bike, nobody told the truth except me. And to my surprise, my parents don't scold me. Instead, they said I was a honest boy. I have benefited great from my family rules. I'm not the best at schoolwork, but classmates trust me and nearly everyone is willing to making friends with me. It helps me know better about “Honesty is the best policy”．
答案与解析：
Last weekend I went fishing with my cousins by a river, where was two miles
①whichaway from my home by bike. When we were about to return forhome, we found one of our
②bike lost. We were really nervous then. Asking about the lost bike, nobody told ③bikes④Askedthe truth except me.
And to my surprise, my parents don't scold me.
⑤But/Yet⑥didn'tInstead, they said I was a honest boy. I have benefited great from my family ⑦an⑧greatlyrules. I'm not the best at schoolwork, but ∧ classmates trust me and nearly
⑨myeveryone is willing to making friends with me. It helps me know better about
⑩make“Honesty is the best policy”．
①where改为which 此处引导非限制性定语从句，先行词是a river，关系词在从句中作主语，故将where改为which。
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②删除for home为副词时，不与任何介词连用，故删除for。
③bike改为bikes “one of＋可数名词复数形式”为固定搭配，意为“……中的一个”，故将bike改为bikes。
④Asking改为Asked 此处为分词作状语，ask与其逻辑主语we之间为被动关系，应用过去分词形式，表示被问，故将Asking改为Asked。
⑤And改为But/Yet 句意为：但是令我吃惊的是，我的父母没有批评我，而是说我是个诚实的孩子。根据句意可知，此处前后为转折关系，表示“但是/然而”，故将And改为But/Yet。
⑥don't改为didn't 根据时间状语Last weekend可知，此处表示发生在过去的动作，应用一般过去时，故将don't改为didn't。
⑦a改为an honest中的字母h不发音，该词的发音以元音音素开头，其前有不定冠词时，应用an，故将a改为an。
⑧great改为greatly 此处修饰动词benefited，应用副词，故将great改为greatly。 ⑨在classmates前加my 此处指“我的同学们”，应为特指，故在classmates前加my。
⑩making改为make be willing to do sth.为固定搭配，意为“乐意做某事”，故将making改为make。
Test 3
[2019·湖南省师大附中月考五]Recently, a lot of students in our school has fallen ill due to the bad weather. I notice they don't ask doctors for help but tried medicines by themselves in order to save time. Personally, I don't agree with them. First, it is not easier for us students to make a wise choose of medicines to cure illness. For example, when having a cold, most of us prefer to take antibiotics, which in fact is not necessary at most cases. And medicines have side effect, which may pose a threat to us because we don't have the enough knowledge of them. From I stand, I strongly suggest we talk to the doctor after taking medicines. Because stay healthy is more important than anything else. As a saying goes, an ounce of prevention is worth a pound of cure.
答案与解析：
Recently, a lot of students in our school has fallen ill due to the bad
①haveweather. I notice they don't ask doctors for help but tried medicines by themselves
②tryin order to save time. Personally, I don't agree with them. First, it is not easier
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for us students to make a wise choose of medicines to cure illness. For example,
④choicewhen having a cold, most of us prefer to take antibiotics, which in fact is not necessary at most cases. And medicines have side effect , which may pose a
⑤in⑥effectsthreat to us because we don't have the enough knowledge of them. From ∧ I stand,
⑦⑧whereI strongly suggest we talk to the doctor after taking medicines. Because
⑨beforestay healthy is more important than anything else. As a saying goes, an ounce ⑩stayingof prevention is worth a pound of cure.
①has改为have 本句主语为a lot of students，谓语动词应用复数形式，故将has改为have。
②tried改为try 分析句子结构可知，try为句子的谓语，与前面的don't ask为并列关系，时态应保持一致，故应用一般现在时。故将tried改为try。
③easier改为easy “It is＋adj. for sb. to do sth.”为固定句式，意为“做某事对某人来说是……的”。easy在句中作表语，句中没有比较之意。故将easier改为easy。
④choose改为choice make a choice为固定搭配，意为“作出选择”。故将choose改为choice。
⑤at改为in in most cases意为“在大多数情况下”，是固定短语。故将at改为in。 ⑥effect改为effects effect为可数名词，side effect意为“副作用”。由于其前没有冠词修饰，所以此处应用复数形式。故将effect改为effects。
⑦删除the enough knowledge在句中非特指，所以，前面的the是多余的，故将the删除。
⑧在From后加where 分析句子结构可知，此处为宾语从句。句意为：从我个人的立场看，我强烈建议我们在服药前和医生谈谈。引导词在句中作地点状语，应用where引导该从句。故在From后加where。
⑨after改为before 根据常识可知，应在服药前咨询医生。故将after改为before。 ⑩stay改为staying 此处作句子主语，应用动名词形式。故将stay改为staying。
Test 4
[2019·衡水中学考试]As my parents and I was on our way to pay for our parking space, a woman came up to them. She said she had just paid for hers but she had called back home just now and was curious about how we would like to have her parking pass. She refused to take up any money for it and insisted that we took it. We gladly accepted it and thanked her. We got down to the beach in time to watch the sun setting because
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of this woman's kind and we were so thankfully. It was a wonderful experience and a sunset was so delighted a sight!
答案与解析：
As my parents and I was on our way to pay for our parking space, a woman
①werecame up to them . She said she had just paid for hers but she had ∧ called back
②us③beenhome just now and was curious about how we would like to have her parking pass.
④whetherShe refused to take up any money for it and insisted that we took it. We gladly
⑤⑥takeaccepted it and thanked her. We got down to the beach in time to watch the sun setting because of this woman's kind and we were so thankfully . It was a wonderful
⑦kindness⑧thankfulexperience and a sunset was so delighted a sight!
⑨the⑩delightful①was改为were 本句主语为my parents and I，所以系动词应为复数形式，故将was改为were。
②them改为us 此处指代前面提到的my parents and I，所以，应用第一人称复数宾格代词。句意为：……一位女士向我们走来。故将them改为us。
③在had后加been she与call back之间为被动关系，因此应用过去完成时的被动语态。故在had后加been。
④how改为whether 句意为：她说她已经付了停车费，但是刚被打电话叫回家。她想知道我们是否愿意用她的停车通行证。about后接宾语从句，从句引导词意为“是否”，且位于介词后，应用whether。故将how改为whether。
⑤删除up 句意为：她拒绝因此而要任何钱并坚持要我们接受她的停车通行证。take up意为“占据(一定的时间或空间)”，此处take意为“接受(某人给的东西、提议等)”。故删除up。
⑥took改为take insist作“坚持主张；坚决要求”讲时，后接宾语从句用虚拟语气，谓语用“should＋动词原形”的形式，should可以省略。故将took改为take。
⑦kind改为kindness kind在此作介词of的宾语，其前有woman's修饰，应用其名词形式，意为“善良”，故将kind改为kindness。
⑧thankfully改为thankful 此处在句中作表语，应用形容词形式。句意为：因为这位女士的善举，我们才能及时去到海边看日落，我们对此很是感激。故将thankfully改为thankful。
⑨a改为the 因前文已经提到过sun setting，所以此处应表示特指，其前应加定冠词the，故将a改为the。
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⑩delighted改为delightful 句意为：这是一次美好的体验，并且日落也是如此美丽的景色。delighted意为“高兴的”，常用人作主语；delightful意为“令人愉快的”，常用物体作主语。此处形容日落令人愉快，应用delightful。故将delighted改为delightful。
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