初中英语作文题目及范文解读
1．为感受母爱情深，弘扬知恩图报，某英语网站正在举办以\"My Mother\"为主题的征文活动．请根据下列思维导图所提供的信息，写一篇短文，介绍你的母亲和你与母亲间的故事．
参考词汇：give much to…，It's my turn to…，try my best to… 提示：
1）短文内容须包括所给内容，含母亲曾为你所做的事和你将为母亲所做的事各一件，并阐述原因；
2）请注意短文结构层次、时态运用和卷面整洁度； 3）词数80个左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数； 4）文中不得出现学校和个人的相关信息． My Mother
We need love．We also need to show love．The person I love most is my
mother． The person I love most is my mother．My mother is 41 years old．She is of medium build with long black hair．Shi is quiet．She is a history teacher in a middle school．She likes dancing．She can cook delicious food．
She did a lot for me when I was a child．She bought whatever I needed for my study，even though she didn't have much money．She sent me from piano lessons to dancing lessons at the weekend．She cooked delicious and healthy food for me． When I grow up，I will do what I can to make my mother happy．I will find a good job after I graduate from college．I'll save money and buy beautiful clothes that make her look still young．I'll take her to wonderful sights around China．Most importantly，I will stay with her when I have free time．That's what she wants most，I think ．
【分析】这是一篇提纲作文．内容是以\"My mother\"为题介绍自己的母亲和你们的真情故事．时态主要为一般现在时和一般过去时．人称主要为第一人称和第三人称． 写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文． 其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点： 1介绍：年龄，工作，外貌，能力，爱好 2她为我做的事
3我将会为她做什么 常用到的重点短语： even though即使 grow up 长大
make sb+adj使某人怎么样 like doing sth喜欢做某事 cook…for sb为某人做… graduate from…从…毕业 【高分句型】
1．She bought ①whatever I needed for my study，②even though she didn't have much money． ①whatever无论什么．引导的宾语从句，作为buy的宾语． ②even though引导的让步状语从句．
2．I'll save money and buy beautiful clothes that make her look still young．
that make her look still young是一定语从句，修饰先行词clothes，关系词that作为定语从句的主语，不可省略．
3．①Most importantly，I will stay with her②when I have free time． ①Most importantly最重要的 ②when引导的时间状语从句． 【解答】My mother
We need love．We also need to love．The person I love most is my mother．The person I love most is my mother．My mother is 41 years old．She is of medium build with long black hair．Shi is quiet．She is a history teacher in a middle school．She likes dancing．She can cook delicious food．（介绍）
She did a lot for me when I was a child．She bought whatever I needed for my study，even though she didn't have much money．【高分句型】She sent me from piano lessons to dancing lessons at the weekend．She cooked delicious and healthy food for me．（她为我做的事） When I grow up，I will do what I can to make my mother happy．I will find a good job after I graduate from college．I'll save money and buy beautiful clothes that make her look still young．【高分句型】I'll take her to wonderful sights around China．Most importantly，I will stay with her when I have free time．【高分句型】That's what she wants most，I think．（我将会为她做什么）
【点评】本题是一篇图表作文，图表作为书面表达的一种信息提示方式，比提纲作文线索显得更简洁明了，写作时也容易区分表达，本题是介绍自己的母亲，学生们有话可说，在写作时，要特别注意几种情况的描述，不能逐句翻译，同时要根据提示有效灵活的构思，恰当使用逻辑词语，让文章显得有条理，不杂乱．
2．每个人的成长总是伴随着各种困难和烦恼，我们应该如何面对？请根据提示，结合自身实际，写一篇英语短文，谈谈遇到这些问题时，你是如何解决的． 提示：
困难和烦恼 课业负担重 考试压力大 被他嘲笑 与同学发生争吵 与父母沟通困难
要求：（1）从表格中选择一到两困难或烦恼进行阐述 （2）短文词数不得不于80个
（3）文中不得出现真实的人名、地名和校名． 【分析】【高分句型一】
应对方式 向老师求助 与朋友交流 看书、写日记 运动、听音乐
It takes them five or six hours to finish the homework．他们花了五个或六个小时完成作业． It takes sb some time to do sth．某人做某事花费…时间． 【高分句型二】
Reading books is another good way to solve the problems．读书是解决问题的另一个好办法． Reading books 动名词作主语，动词用三单式；a good way to do sth做某事的一个好办法 【解答】Some students are stressed out and have trouble because of the learning pressure．They have too much homework every day．It takes them five or six hours to finish the homework．【高分句型一】They often quarrel with others and are laughed at．The found it difficult to communicate with their parents．（困难和烦恼）
All these make them not sleep well and concentrate on their lessons．Some of them even have a headache and can't go to school．（导致的后果）I think they should ask help for the teachers and communicate with their friends．Reading books is another good way to solve the problems．【高分句型二】Besides，they should exercise more and listen to the music．They should be confident and try to relax themselves．Plan the time carefully so that they can have more time to rest．（解决办法）
【点评】本篇写作需注意要求中所提供的要点，不可遗漏．需在平时积累相关的词汇，写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系．上下文之间可以适当使用连接词．如but，so，then等
3．暑假马上就要到了，在这个防控疫情的特殊假期，作为中学生，你既应该做好个人防护，同时也要规划好自己的学习和生活，过一个安全、充实的假期．
你校英语网站正在开展以\"My plans for the summer holiday\"为主题的征文活动．假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你暑假打算做些什么、为什么想做这些事、你的暑假将会过得怎么样．
提示词语： mask （口罩），go over， draw， housework， fun 提示问题：●What are you going to do？ ●Why are you going do these things？ ●What is your summer holiday going to be like？
My plans for the summer holiday
During the summer holiday， to stay safe from coronavirus（新冠病毒），I _______．
【分析】【高分句型一】
Second， I will try not to go out．第二，我会尽量不外出． try not to do sth尽量不要做某事． 【高分句型二】
If we have to go out， I should wear masks．如果我必须出去，我应该戴上口罩． if引导条件状语从句．
【解答】During the summer holiday， to stay safe from coronavirus（新冠病毒），I should follow some important rules．
First of all， I should not believe and spread rumors． Second，I will try not to go out．【高分句型一】If I have to go out， I should wear masks．【高分句型二】Third， I must keep our rooms clean．I need to live a healthy life and eat a healthy diet．Fourth， I should be confident．I am sure to pull through! In the
mean while， during the summer vacation，I am going to study online and finish my homework on time every day．Besides， I will keep doing exercise for half an hour every day to keep healthy．
【点评】在写作时要求能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．
4．根据中文大意和英文提示词语，写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的短文．请不要写出你的真实校名和姓名．提示词语供选用．
某英文报纸就他/她的微笑（His/Her Smile）话题征文，请你投稿．
微笑，是对他人表示友善和关爱．微笑可以给人激励，可以使人奋进．请你结合自己的经历谈谈在你的生活中谁的微笑打动了你，为什么他/她的微笑会打动你，你有什么体会． 提示词语：show，encourage，difficult，brave，learn to do，feel good，cheer up，try one's best．
【分析】高分句型：
①Three years ago，when I made a speech on my first day of class，I was so nervous that I couldn't say a word．三年前，当我第一节课发表演讲时，我紧张得说不出话来．句子中when引导一个时间状语从句；so+形容词+that表示如此怎么样以至于…
②His smile was important because it gave me self﹣confidence．他的微笑很重要，因为它给了我自信．句子中because引导一个原因状语从句．
【解答】Smiles are beautiful and important．A smile given to the right person at the right time can brighten that person's day．（引出话题）
I was once moved by a smile from my friend．Three years ago，when I made a speech on my first day of class，I was so nervous that I couldn't say a word（高分句型）．Tony，one of my classmates，sitting in the front row，smiled at me and spoke in a low voice，\"Yes，you can．\"I was greatly encouraged by his smile．His smile was important because it gave me self﹣confidence（高分句型）．（我生活中的一次经历）
I will never forget my friend's smile because I've learned that something so simple can make a big
difference．（我的体会）
【点评】对于作文题，首先应该充分了解题目的含义及要求．若给定的条件不足，可进行适当发挥；同时，平时还应该多注意关键句型、固定短语及高分句型的理解及记忆，做题时才能得心应手．
5．根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50 词的文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。
伟大的科学家爱因斯坦说过：\"兴趣是最好的老师。\"这就是说一个人一旦对某事物有了浓厚的兴趣，就会主动去求知、去探索、去实践。
某英文网站正在开展以\"My Hobby\"为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你的兴趣爱好是什么，你是如何培养你的兴趣以及你从中收获了什么。 提示词语：encourage，interested，pleasure，grow 提示问题：1.What is your hobby？ 2.How did you develop it？
3.What advantages has it brought to you？
. 【分析】【高分句型一】：
I think that reading is interesting，because I can know a lot of information.我认为阅读很有趣，因为我能知道很多信息。句子中think后面跟的是一个宾语从句。 【高分句型二】：
I would like to be an editor when I grow up，so I need to read more books.我长大后想当一名编辑，所以我需要读更多的书。would like to do sth表示想做某事。 【解答】
My hobby
Everyone has some hobbies ，so do I.I have many hobbies，such as reading and painting，they have changed me a lot.But reading is my favourite hobby.（引出话题）
I loved reading when I was six years old.My family has a big shelf for holding books.There are so many world famous novels and so on.Nothing else to do，I like to sit on shelf to read.I think that reading is interesting，because I can know a lot of information.【高分句型一】And then，because of reading，my writing is very good.I would like to be an editor when I grow up，so I need to read more books.【高分句型二】Reading has brought much pleasure and it can broaden my horizons.（怎么样发展兴趣爱好及给我带来的东西）
All in all，reading bridges the gap between my dream and my goal.In order to succeed in my career in the future，I must keep reading.（结束语）
【点评】这是一篇提纲作文，题目要求围绕表格内容写作，命题既有限制又给予学生发挥的空间。在写作中要综合运用所学知识，适当运用连词、副词等进行过渡。
6．假如你是八中学生王凯，你在国际部公告栏中看到了一则招募寄宿家庭（host family）
的信息，你很感兴趣．请你根据招募要求写一份邮件． Host Families Wanted
Twenty students from Lyndon School，USA are coming for a one﹣month study．They need 20 host families．
Do you want to be a host family？If so，introduce yourself，your family，your hobbies．If you're interested in it，e﹣mail the information to Lyndonschool @ gmail．com．
Student Union
No Middle School
要求：1．邮件中不能出现真实姓名等相关信息；2．不少于70词． To：Lyndon School Subject：A host family for you Dear American friends， ___________．
Yours， Wang Kai
【分析】【高分句型一】
It is big enough to hold one more person．
它足够大，可以多容纳一个人．It is +形容词+to do sth足够…做某事． 【高分句型二】
I am looking forward to your reply． 期待您的回复．look forward to…期待… 【解答】To：Lyndon School Subject：A host family for you Dear American friends，
My name is Wang Kai．I'm a boy．I'm sixteen．I am in Class One，Junior One．I am outgoing．I like singing and dancing．I like making friends and English is my favorite subject．（介绍自己） There are three people in my family．They are my parents and me．My father is a teacher and my mother is a doctor．My parents are very friendly and helpful．There are three bedrooms in my house．It is big enough to hold one more person．【高分句型一】（介绍家庭） So I want to apply to become one of the host families．I am looking forward to your reply．【高分句型二】（期待） Yours， Wang Kai
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．
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7．假定你是李华，你的朋友Mike遇到了一些困难，请根据Mike的邮件内容给他回信。
注意： 1.词数80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 To：Li Hua， From：Mike Dear Li Hua，
I'm afraid I've got some big problems recently.I failed my English exam last week and I don't know how to improve my English.What's more，my mother talks too much to me.She always tells me， \"Be careful while crossing the street.\" \"Put on more clothes.\" \"Did you do a good job at school？\" and so on.I'm really annoyed. What should I do？ Mike Dear Mike，
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Yours， Li Hua
【分析】【高分句型一】
First，you had better make a studying plan so that you can study well.首先，你最好制定一个学习计划，这样你就可以学习得好。 had better do sth最好做某事。 so that引导目的状语从句。 【高分句型二】
I hope what I say can help you a lot.我希望我说的话能对你有很大帮助。 what引导宾语从句。 【解答】Dear Mike，
As a teenager，I met the same problem as you.But now I can get along better with my problems.Here are some ideas for you.（点题）
First，you had better make a studying plan so that you can study well. 【高分句型一】Second，you should make full use of your spare time to do more listening and reading about English to increase vocabulary.Third，you should have a good command of important sentence of each unit.（学习英语的方法）
As for your mother，I think your mother talks much because she cares about you.So you should listen to her.If your opinions are different from your mother's，you can communicate with her，and tell her what you are thinking about. （和妈妈的交流） I hope what I say can help you a lot.【高分句型二】（希望）
Yours， Li Hua 【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和
句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
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To：Li Ming From：John Dear Li Ming，
We will have a Chinese cultural festival in our school next week. I need to give a report about a Chinese special day. Can you help me with some information？ For example， when is the day？ Why and how do Chinese people celebrate it？ Is there any traditional food？ How can I make it？ Looking forward to your reply. John
To：John From：Li Ming Dear John，
. Yours， Li Ming
【分析】【高分句型一】
Now I'll introduce our traditional festival ﹣ Mid﹣Autumn Festival to you， which falls in September or October.现在我将向你介绍我们的传统节日﹣﹣中秋节，它是在九月或十月。
关系词which 引导非限制性定语从句。 【高分句型二】
What impresses us most is that all the family members like to stay outside in the evening to enjoy the moon as they are eating moon cakes.最让我们印象深刻的是，所有的家庭成员都喜欢晚上呆在外面享受月亮，这时他们在吃月饼。
What 引导主语从句。 that引导宾语从句。 as 引导时间状语从句。 【解答】To：John From：Li Ming Dear John，
Now I'll introduce our traditional festival﹣﹣Mid﹣Autumn Festival to you， which falls in September or October.【高分句型一】（时间）We celebrate the Mid﹣Autumn Festival to celebrate family reunion.（庆祝原因）On that day we usually have a big dinner and the typical food﹣moon cakes together. Mooncakes are our traditional food.They are made of flour， sugar and some nuts.（传统食物及做法）There
are many kinds of moon cakes， such as meat， nuts or something else.What impresses us most is that all the family members like to stay outside in the evening to enjoy the moon as they are eating moon cakes.【高分句型二】 During this time， we may look back on the past and look forward to the future.（介绍有关中秋节的习俗） Yours， Li Ming
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
9．假如你是Tom Brown，接受了Xin Hua Middle School 的邀请，前去做讲座．请根据来自该校 Li Ping 的邮件进行回复． Dear Mr．Brown，
I'm Li Ping from Xin Hua Middle School．Thank you for agreeing to give us a lecture in our school next month．We suggest Friday morning，May 17th．What time would you like to start in the morning？In the hall or on the playground，as you like．
Please let us know if you are happy with the date and if you would like us to book a room in a nearby hotel for the night of May 16th． We are looking forward to your reply． Yours sincerely，Li Ping
邮件内容包括：①5 月 17 日没有空，深表歉意，建议改在 5 月 24 日（下周五）； ②选定讲座的地点； ③要求预订一间安静的房间；
④询问讲座的报酬（lecture fee）和旅途费用（travel cost）等情况．要求：（1）邮件必须包含以上内容，并可适当增加，使行文通顺、连贯； （2）邮件不得使用真实的人名、校名；
（3）词数 80 左右，开头和结尾已给出（不计词数）． Dear Li Ping，
Thank you very much for your e﹣mail． __________．
I'm looking forward to your reply．
Yours sincerely，
Tom Brown
【分析】高分句型一：
And the school hall may be the best choice in case of the bad weather． 学校礼堂可能是最好的选择，以防天气不好．in case of 以防，万一 高分句型二：
If you agree to the date，please book a quiet single room in a nearby hotel for the night of May 23rd．
如果您同意约会，请在附近的酒店预订一间5月23日晚上入住的安静的单人房．if 如果，
引导条件状语从句，book a quiet single room 预订一间安静的单人房 【解答】Dear Li Ping，
Thank you very much for your e﹣mail．I am sorry to tell you that I am not free on Friday morning，May 17th．I will be very happy to come and give the lecture next Friday，May 24th． （5 月 17 日没有空，深表歉意，建议改在 5 月 24 日）I would like to start at nine in the morning．And the school hall may be the best choice in case of the bad weather．【高分句型一】（讲座的地点）If you agree to the date，please book a quiet single room in a nearby hotel for the night of May 23rd．【高分句型二】I will be very grateful if you can give me some information about the lecture fee and my travel cost．（讲座的报酬和旅途费用） I'm looking forward to your reply．
Yours sincerely，
Tom Brown
【点评】在解答写作这类试题时，要根据短文的中心思想考虑如何开头、展开和结尾，设想几个承上启下的连词，将主要句型、关键词语草草记下，形成提纲，写时切忌结构分散，废话连篇，严重跑题．
10．请以\"My Best Friend and I\"为题写一篇短文，说说你们的外貌，性格，爱好等，80词左右。
. 【分析】【高分句型一】
We both like reading.我们都喜欢读书 like doing sth表示喜欢做某事。 【高分句型二】
I want to be a doctor.我想成为一名医生。 句子中want to do sth表示想做某事。
【解答】Linda is my best friend. We are the same in some ways， but we are different in some ways. （点题）We both have black eyes and black hair. She is taller than me. And she is more serious than me. I am more outing and funnier than her.We both like reading. 【高分句型一】She likes talk shows， but I like game shows.She wants to be a writer. I want to be a doctor.【高分句型二】（从各个方面介绍我们俩）
We often help each other and we are good friends.（总结全文）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
11．假定你是李平，最近收到意大利朋友Linda 的电子邮件。请你阅读来信后回复。词数80左右。 Subject： From：Linda To：Li Ping
Dear Li Ping，
How's it going？We haven't written to each other for a year.I think both of us may change a lot.What are you like now？Which is the most important change for you？The biggest change for me is that I fall in love with Chinese tea.As far as I know，Hangzhou is famous for tea.Can you tell me how tea is produced in your city？Hope to hear form you soon. Love， Linda Dear Linda，
I'm glad to hear from you.It's been a year since I wrote to you last time. . I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours， Li Ping
【分析】【高分句型一】
The biggest change for me is that I fall in love with English movies.对我来说最大的变化是我爱上了英语电影。 that引导表语从句。 fall in love with 爱上。 【高分句型二】
Watching English movies not only makes me practice my listening and speaking，but also makes me learn a lot about Western culture.看英语电影不仅能锻炼我的听力和口语，还能让我学到很多关于西方文化的知识。 not only…but also…不仅……而且…… 【解答】Dear Linda，
I'm glad to hear from you.It's been a year since I wrote to you last time.I'm a different person now.I became tall and strong.I took up many hobbies.The biggest change for me is that I fall in love with English movies.【高分句型一】Watching English movies not only makes me practice my listening and speaking，but also makes me learn a lot about Western culture.【高分句型二】（最大的变化是什么）
Hangzhou is famous for tea.Tea has a history of thousands of years in China.People usually plant tea on the side of the hill.When it is ready，it is picked by hand and sent to factories for processing. （介绍茶是如何种植的） I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours， Li Ping
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
12．根据中文和英文提示，写一封意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于50词的邮件．邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．所给提示词仅供选用．
注意：请不要写出你的校名和姓名，请不要抄写本试卷文章中的原句．
假设你叫李华，最近和自己的英国朋友Peter在谈论各自敬佩的人物，他在上封邮件中向你介绍了自己所敬佩的一位作家，他希望你也能向他介绍一位自己所敬佩的人．请根据他提出的以下问题给他回复一封邮件．
参考词汇：work hard；kind；helpful；responsible；role model
Who do you admire？（a writer/a sports player/your parent/your classmate/…） What does/did he/she do？ Why do you admire him/her？ Hi!Peter，
Thanks for telling me about J．K．Rowling．She is really a great writer!
One of the people I admire a lot is my father．He is a history teacher at a middle school．He loves his job and works very hard．To make his students interested in history，he makes a lot of efforts to prepare each lesson．He is also patient and helpful to his students．
As for me，he is not only my father but also a good friend．Whenever I have problems，he is the first person who offers me advice and encouragement．My father is my role model．He has taught me to be kind，hardworking and responsible．
Yours， Li Hua．
【分析】【高分句型一】
One of the people I admire a lot is my father．（我最敬佩的人物之一是我的父亲） I admire是定语从句，修饰people，省略了who． 【高分句型二】
Whenever I have problems，he is the first person who offers me advice and encouragement．（每当我遇到问题时，他都是第一个给我建议和鼓励的人） whenever引导的时间状语从句．其中who引导的定语从句，修饰person． 【解答】Hi!Peter，
Thanks for telling me about J．K．Rowling．She is really a great writer!
One of the people I admire a lot is my father．【高分句型一】（我崇拜的人）He is a history teacher at a middle school．（他的职业）He loves his job and works very hard．To make his students interested in history，he makes a lot of efforts to prepare each lesson．He is also patient and helpful to his students．
As for me，he is not only my father but also a good friend．Whenever I have problems，he is the first person who offers me advice and encouragement．【高分句型二】
My father is my role model．He has taught me to be kind，hardworking and responsible．（为什么） Yours， Li Hua
【点评】在解答写作这类试题时，要根据短文的中心思想考虑如何开头、展开和结尾，设想几个承上启下的连词，将主要句型、关键词语草草记下，形成提纲，写时切忌结构分散，废话连篇，严重跑题．
13．为响应我市全面创建国家卫生城市的号召，某校开展了\"绿色港城，健康生活\"为主题的英语征文活动．请你以\"The Green City ，the Healthy Life\" 为题，根据表格中的图片及文字提示，简要描述并适当发表自己的观点，写一篇英语短文．
主题
绿色港城，健康生活
做法骑车出行，减少空气污染； 垃圾入箱，保持城市整洁； 多种树木，保护自然环境． 你的观点……（至少2 条） 【分析】高分句型：
1．①In my opinion，I'll ②try my best to ③make our city ④cleaner and more beautiful．在我看来，我将尽我最大的努力使我们的城市更干净、更美丽． ①In one's opinion固定短语\"依照某人的看法 ②try one's best to do sth固定表达\"竭尽全力做某事\" ③make sth+形容词做宾补\"使得…怎么样\" ④比较级的运用
2．①In a word，everyone can do something②to③make a difference．总之，每个人都可以做些事情让我们的城市改变． ①in a word固定短语\"总之\" ②动词不定式作目的状语．
③make a difference固定短语\"有影响；起（重要）作用\" 【解答】The Green City，the Healthy Life
As a citizen of Lianyungang，it's our duty to help build a green city so that we can live a healthy life．（点题）We can reduce air pollution by riding bicycles．It's better for us to put rubbish into the rubbish bin．In this way，we can keep our city clean．And we'd better plant more trees to protect the natural environment．（给出建议）
In my opinion，I'll try my best to make our city cleaner and more beautiful．（高分句型一）I can save water by taking shorter showers．Secondly，I can save energy by turning off the lights when I leave the room．（表明自己的观点）In a word，everyone can do something to make a difference．（总结）（高分句型二）
【点评】本题是考查书面表达能力，在平时的学习中要加强写的训练，写作时要做到字迹工整，卷面整洁，语言流畅要把文中的要点写全，做到语句通顺，过渡自然连贯．
14．地球是我们人类共同的家园．\"低碳、环保\"已成为当今时代主题．目前，《学英语》
杂志准备在八年级学生中开展以\"Save our earth\"为主题的英文征文活动．现请你根据以下表格的提示，写一篇100词左右的短文参评．
importance Problems Steps
have only one earth
not have enough resources，have kinds of pollution，such as…
To save water To save power To reduce pollution To have a green lifestyle
注意：（1）文中不能出现真实姓名、校名；
（2）文章标题已给出，短文给出的文字不计入总词数； （3）可适当发挥，以使行文连贯． Save Our Earth
Earth is our home． ． 【分析】【高分句型一】
It is important for us to save our earth对于我们来说拯救我们地球是重要的．
it is+adj+for sb+to do sth对某人来说做某事是怎么样的，it是形式主语，动词不定式做真正主语． 【高分句型二】
①In order to save power，we should turn off the lights ②when we leave a room为了节约能源，我们离开房间的时候应该关灯． ①in order to do sth 为了做某事．做目的状语． ②when引导的时间状语从句． 【解答】Save Our Earth
Earth is our home．We have only one earth．It is important for us to save our earth．【高分句型一】（重要性）
Our environment is changing for the worse．We have many problems．Nature is our greatest treasure．We depend on its rich resources to live．However，we don't have enough resources to use．At the same time，we have kinds of pollution，such as air pollution，water pollution and noise pollution．（问题）
It's time for us to go green．Here are some simple steps to take．We can save water by taking shorter showers and turning off the tap when we brush our teeth．In order to save power，we should turn off the lights when we leave a room．【高分句型二】We should not use plastic bags．Instead，we should take our own bags when shopping．Moreover，it is important for us to develop a green lifestyle．We should do more exercise and watch less TV．（措施） Follow these small steps，and you can make a big difference to the Earth．
【点评】本篇写作需注意要求中所提供的要点，不可遗漏．需在平时积累相关的词汇，写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系．上下文之间可以适当使用连接词．如but，so，then等．
…（至少写一点） …（至少写一点） …（至少写一点） …（至少写一点）
15．你的笔友city想了解你在上周志愿者活动。假如你是李平，请根据city在电子邮件中的提问，给她回信。字数在80字左右。 From：Cindy1998@163.com Subject：Interested in Volunteering Hi.
How are you？I know you are busy with your math exam these days.How is it going？I think you are good at math，aren't？Anyway，it will be over soon.In your last letter，you mentioned that you and your classmates organized a volunteer activity.I just want to know more about that.Was that activity successful？
Cindy
Dear Cindy， ____________
Yours， Li Ping
【分析】高分句型一：
We also helped clean up the city parks.我们还帮助清理了城市公园。help do sth表示帮着做某事。 高分句型二：
I think it's fantastic to be a volunteer.我觉得当志愿者太棒了。句子中think后面跟一个宾语从句。
【解答】Dear Cindy，
Thank you for your concern.I have finished my maths exam. （数学考试结束了）I did very well in the exam because I was very good at maths.（擅长数学）Last Saturday，I did some volunteer work with other volunteers.
Some of us put up posters.Some handed out advertisements.Others swept the streets.We also helped clean up the city parks. 【高分句型一】When we finished all the work，we were very tired but felt very happy at the same time.
I think it's fantastic to be a volunteer.【高分句型二】（志愿者活动） What do you think of volunteering？Please write back soon!
Yours， Li Ping
【点评】对于电子邮件的格式，与书信的格式相同，但英语的书信应注意和汉语的书信的格式相区别。另外，注意在表述时，应符合英语的表达习惯。
16．运动让我们健康快乐，热爱生活的人更加热爱运动，假如你是 Mary Smith你想加入健康体育俱乐部，请根据下列内容提示写一篇短文，介绍一下你自己的情况，可适当发挥
内容包括：
1．你的姓名、年龄、班级、学校等 2．你收集球类的情况 3．你喜欢的运动等
字数60个字左右，文中不得出现真实姓名
Hello，everyone! My name is Mary Smith． ______． 【分析】高分句型一
I'm a middle school student now．
此句是一般现在时的陈述句．运用短语a middle school student \"一名中学生\"，此句可翻译为\"现在我是一名中学生．\" 高分句型二
I like playing sports very much．
此句是一般现在时的陈述句．运用短语like doing sth \"喜欢做某事\"，此句可翻译为\"我非常喜欢运动．\"
【解答】Hello，My name's Mary Smith．I'm 12 years old．I'm a middle school student now．（高分句型一）I'm in No.2 Middle School．I'm in Class One，Grade Seven．（要点一，介绍我的姓名、年龄、班级及学校．I like playing sports very much．（高分句型二）I have two basketballs and four volleyballs．（要点二，介绍我的收集的球类．）I often play basketball with my classmates after school．（要点三，介绍我放学后的活动．）
【点评】本题是提纲作文，写作时能够根据提纲提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．
17．请写一篇60词左右的短文，描述一种濒临灭绝的动物．请将答案写在答题卡对应的横线上． 内容包括：
1．至少介绍动物的三个基本情况（如来源地、外貌、性格，能力、食物等） 2．描述动物危险的现状 3．保护动物的措施 【分析】【高分句型一】
Many pandas are killed by people who want to sell their fur for money一些熊猫被那些想要皮毛卖钱的人杀害．
who引导的定语从句，修饰people． 【高分句型二】
Only if we human beings take some measures can wild animals be preserved．只有我们人类采取一些行动，野生动物才会被保护．
only if后面跟条件状语从句，用陈述语气，后面用部分倒装句，be动词、助动词和情态动词放在主语之前．
【解答】I like animals very much．My favorite animal are pandas，they are so cute．They have two big and black eyes，they are very shy，so if I want to see them，I have to be
quiet．They like to eat bamboo．Do you know where do pandas come from？They are from China．（熊猫的基本情况）
But now they are in danger．And there are few places where pandas can live．Many pandas are killed by people who want to sell their fur for money．（为什么有些野生动物处于危险之中） 【高分句型一】
We are not alone in the world．We human beings could not live without all the plants and animals around us．So protecting wild animals is very important． （为什么保护野生动物很重要） We must take measures to keep plants from being destroyed and stop animals from being killed．If each of us can plant a tree and build a birdhouse，the world will be more beautiful．It is very easy but useful．（我们应该采取什么措施来保护野生动物．）Only if we human beings take some measures can wild animals be preserved．【高分句型二】
【点评】这是一篇给材料作文，介绍保护野生动物的重要性．结合所给材料，可知本文主要是用一般现在时态，第一人称进行叙述，注意主谓一致问题．句子结构主要为系表结构，注意一些常见句式的应用．写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用．写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系．
18．为配合程\"创建文明城市（build a civilized city）\"活动，学校举办以\"How to Behave Well\"为主题的英语征文比赛．现请你用英语写一篇参赛短文．内容包括：
在家里 1．帮助父母做家务
2．… 3．…
在学校 1．与同学们友好相处
2．… 3．…
在公共场合 1．不大声说笑
2．… 3．…
1．文中必须包含所给提示要点，并给每个场合补充一至两点做法； 2．词数80左右．开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数； 3．不得出现真实学校、班级名称和自己的真实姓名．
In order to build a civilized city，we students are supposed to behave well in the activity． At home，we should help parents do some chores，such as doing the dishes，making the beds and folding the clothes．Besides，we should show respect to the olds and try to understand them．
As a student，I think it's very important to get along well with classmates and be ready to help those in trouble．Next we should be polite to others，respect our teachers and classmates．Besides，we should follow the school rules．We shouldn't talk loudly in school，especially in the library．
In society，we'd better not talk or laugh loudly in public．What's more，we should always be ready to help other people when they are in trouble．Finally，we can help do something，like cleaning up city parks，to make our city cleaner．
In a word，if each of us does our part from now on，our world will become a harmonious society．
【分析】【高分句型一】
①What's more，we should always be ready to help other people ②when they are in trouble．再者，当别人有困难时候我们应该帮助他们． ①what's more再者，作为插入语． ②when引导的时间状语从句． 【高分句型二】
Finally，we can help do something，①like cleaning up city parks，②to make our city cleaner．最后，我们可以帮忙做一些事情，例如打扫城市公园，让我们的城市更干净． ①like介词，例如…举出事例． ②动词不定式做目的状语．
【解答】In order to build a civilized city，we students are supposed to behave well in the activity．
At home，we should help parents do some chores，such as doing the dishes，making the beds and folding the clothes．Besides，we should show respect to the olds and try to understand them．（在家里）
As a student，I think it's very important to get along well with classmates and be ready to help those in trouble．Next we should be polite to others，respect our teachers and classmates．Besides，we should follow the school rules．We shouldn't talk loudly in school，especially in the library．（在学校）
In society，we'd better not talk or laugh loudly in public．What's more，we should always be ready to help other people when they are in trouble．【高分句型一】Finally，we can help do something，like cleaning up city parks，to make our city cleaner．【高分句型二】（在公共场合）
In a word，if each of us does our part from now on，our world will become a harmonious society．
【点评】写作时先要围绕这些要点组织材料，确定写作内容，注意将这些要点全部表达出来，并且要有适当的发挥，在谈到自己的观点时，要结合活动内容，写出自己的观点．
19．假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Tom来信关心你将要参加的中考的情况，请根据以下表格的信息回信告知．
考试日期和科目
1． 考1． 6月16日至18日；
第一天考语文、物理（physics）；第二天是数学、政治（politics）；第三天是英语和化学（chemistry）．
考试准备情况 考试时的状态 对试题的感受 对考试结果的期待 提示词：
1．考进理想的学校： enter my ideal school
初三以来一直在准备……
会有点紧张，但会很快平静下来，因为……
不会很难，但要认真对待． 考进理想的学校……
注意：1． 词数80左右（文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数）； 2． 不得透露自己学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分． Dear Tom，
Thank you for your concern． Well， I'm going to take the once﹣a﹣year Senior High School entrance examination． We are arranged to attend the exam on June 16th to 18th， on the first day， Chinese and physics will be tested， the second day maths and politics， the third day English and chemistry．Over the past days，we have been busy in preparing for this exam since we are in Grade 9．Besides listening to our teachers carefully in class， we often work deep into night． Therefore， I believe I can succeed．
At first， I will feel a bit nervous but soon I can calm down because Chinese and English are very easy and maths is my favorite subject， you know．So I suppose I can get a good mark and I will be able to enter my ideal school．
Best wishes!
Yours， Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：
Over the past days， we have been busy in preparing for this exam since we are in Grade 9．在过去的日子里，我们一直忙于准备考试，因为我们在9年级．这是一个现在完成进行时的句子，同时考查短语prepare for． 高分句型二：
So I suppose I can get a good mark and I will be able to enter my ideal school．所以我想我能取得好成绩，我就能进入我理想的学校．这是一个省略了that的宾语从句． 【解答】Dear Tom，
Thank you for your concern． Well， I'm going to take the once﹣a﹣year Senior High School entrance examination． We are arranged to attend the exam on June 16th to 18th， on the first day， Chinese and physics will be tested， the second day maths and politics， the third day English and chemistry．（考试日期和科目） Over the past days， we have been busy in preparing for this exam since we are in Grade 9．（高分句型一） Besides listening to our teachers carefully in class， we often work deep into night． Therefore， I believe I can succeed．（考试准备情况）
At first， I will feel a bit nervous but soon I can calm down because Chinese and English are very easy and maths is my favorite subject， you know．（考试的状态） So I suppose I can get a good mark and I will be able to enter my ideal school．（高分句型二）（考试的感受和期待） Best wishes! Yours， Li Hua
【点评】在解答写作这类试题时，要根据短文的中心思想考虑如何开头、展开和结尾，设想几个承上启下的连词，将主要句型、关键词语草草记下，形成提纲，写时切忌结构分散，废话连篇，严重跑题．
20．假如你是李华，学校学生会正在举办\"畅想未来\"为主题的演讲比赛。请根据内容提示，写一篇题为\"For a better future\"的演讲稿，号召同学们一起为美好的未来而做贡献。 主题：构建更美好的未来
目的：为了减少污染；为了保护野生动物……
建议：在生活中使用清洁能源；不购买野生动物产品…… 要求：文中必须包含所有的内容要点，并适当发挥； 语句连贯，不能在作文中出现学校或学生的真实姓名； 80词左右，文章的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。 Dear teachers and students，
Good morning!My name is Li Hua.I'm glad to make a speech here. ______________
That's all.Thank you for listening! 【分析】【高分句型一】
We all hope that our earth is a beautiful home.我们都希望我们的地球是一个美丽的家园。We hope that +宾语从句，表示我们希望……。 【高分句型二】
Let's create a better tomorrow!让我们创造一个更美好的明天！Let's+动词原形，表示让我们……。
【解答】Dear teachers and students，
Good morning!My name is Li Hua.I'm glad to make a speech here.
We all hope that our earth is a beautiful home.（主题） 【高分句型一】People and animals live in harmony.We live in a clean and tidy environment without pollution. （目的）In order to build a better future and reduce pollution，we suggest that students use clean energy in their lives.In order to protect wildlife，we don't buy wildlife products.No business，no harm. （建议）Maybe it's just a good wish.The world is ours and the future is ours.Students，let's work together!Let's create a better tomorrow!【高分句型二】 That's all.Thank you for listening!
【点评】写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合文章要表达的主题，不能出现文章脱节问题，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
21．假设你是John，最近你向朋友Tom分享了自己寒假的学习和生活．请根据提示，写一篇90词左右的邮件．
1． 寒假每天7点半起床，10点半睡觉． 2． 参加数学和英语补习班（take……classes ） 3． 按计划完成各科作业 4． 帮忙做家务如搞卫生，购物． 5． 自己观点2点．
要求： 1． 文章必须包含全部要点内容，可作合理拓展；
2． 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息．
Hi， Tom． What's going on？ I would like to tell you something about my holiday life．
Yours， John
【分析】【高分句型一】
I would like to tell you something about my holiday life．我想告诉你一些关于我的假期生活． would like to do sth想做某事． 【高分句型二】
I have to study hard this term because I will have the final exam in 3 months．这学期我必须努力学习，因为三个月后我就要期末考试了． because引导原因状语从句．
【解答】Hi ，Tom． What's going on？I would like to tell you something about my holiday life．【高分句型一】（点题）
During the Winter Holiday， I did a lot of things． First， I got up at half past seven in the morning even though it was cold， and I went to bed at half past ten at night every day． Second， I took part in Maths and English lessons to learn more． Third， I finished all my homework according to my plan． Forth， I helped do some housework． For example， I often cleaned the floor or did some shopping for my family． Fifth， I did exercise often．Going to the park to have a walk or jogging was my favourite． Sixth， visiting my relatives during the Spring Festival was my lucky time because I could get lucky money! I have to study hard this term because I will have the final exam in 3 months． 【高分句型二】（介绍寒假学习和生活）
Yours， John 【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．
22．上个月，你参加了学校举行的英语周活动。请根据以下内容提示写一篇英语短文，在班会上介绍英语周的活动情况并分享你的收获与感受。 参与人员 活动项目 你参加的项目 你的感受与收获 注意：
1. 词数：80词左右（短文开头已给出，不计入词数，请根据要点适当发挥）。 2. 可根据内容适当发挥。
3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分
所有的学生和英语老师 英文演讲比赛，看英文电影… 英文演讲比赛并拿到一等奖 …
Hello， everyone! We had an English Week in our school last month. . 【分析】【高分句型一】
We became more interested in English and our speaking ability has greatly improved.我们对英语越来越感兴趣，口语能力也有了很大的提高。 became interested in对……感兴趣。 【高分句型二】
I think it is a good way to learn English. think后是省略了引导词that的宾语从句。 a good way to do sth做某事的好方法。
【解答】Hello， everyone! We had an English Week in our school last month.（点题） All the students and our English teachers took part in it.（参加人员）During the week，we sang English songs，joined in English speaking contests，and watched English films.We told stories in English.（活动内容）
We became more interested in English and our speaking ability has greatly improved.【高分句型一】As everyone knows，practice makes perfect.I learned a lot from the activity.I think it is a good way to learn English．【高分句型二】I like it very much.（收获和感受）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
23．我们都热爱自己的母校，为自己是其中一员而自豪．但也许它在校园环境、课业负担、校服式样、课外活动、作息时间等诸多方面并不尽如人意．请你写一篇短文，谈谈母校存在的问题并提出合理化建议． 写作要求：
1．问题和建议至少两条 2．不必自拟标题
3．文中不得出现真实人名和地名 4．词数不少于80．
I love my school，I‘m proud of studying at the school．But I think there are some problems．As we known，nowadays more and more attention is paid to campus safety，including bicycle theft，traffic accidents and students' getting injured in school．It is directly related to the healthy growth of young students and the happiness of millions of families．How to protect us students？
There are several ways．First，we should raise our safety awareness﹣﹣﹣to take care of ourselves in school．Second，traffic regulations must be observed．Besides，we should be more careful in taking physical exercise．Last but not least，we should always stay calm when having trouble with other students．We should solve the problem by communicating rather than quarrel and fight． All teachers and students should make joint efforts to create a safe campus environment． ．
【分析】【高分句型一】
Last but not least，we should always stay calm when having trouble with other students最后也是最重要的，当我们和其他学生有不快的时候我们应该一直保持冷静．
when having trouble with other students＝when we have a trouble with other students省略句的使用． 【高分句型二】
We should solve the problem by communicating rather than quarrel and fight我们应该通过交流沟通解决问题而不是吵架． rather than 而不是
【解答】I love my school，I‘m proud of studying at the school．But I think there are some problems．As we known，nowadays more and more attention is paid to campus safety，including bicycle theft，traffic accidents and students' getting injured in school．It is directly related to the healthy growth of young students and the happiness of millions of families．（问题） How to protect us students？
There are several ways．First，we should raise our safety awareness﹣﹣﹣to take care of ourselves in school．Second，traffic regulations must be observed．Besides，we should be more careful in taking physical exercise．Last but not least，we should always stay calm when having trouble with other students．【高分句型一】We should solve the problem by communicating rather than quarrel and fight．【高分句型二】（建议）
All teachers and students should make joint efforts to create a safe campus environment． 【点评】写作时要注意一些几点：
（1）应抓住文章中心，围绕主题，根据提示列出要写的信息要点． （2）注意内容是否充实、积极和健康． （3）注意文章的结构层次，要凸显文章的主题．
（4）要注意语言规范，表达准确，选材造句都尽量使用学过、见过的语言材料．
24．请你根据所给写作要点和提示，以Advice for Good Manners为题写一篇短文，谈如何遵守社会公德，做一个文明有礼的人．要求文中不得出现真实的人名，和地名，词数不少于80个词．
Advice for Good Manners 写作要点 Beginning Body Part
what to talk about how to behave at home how to behave in public
Ending
_________________． 【分析】【高分句型一】
It's important for everyone to behave well．
why to talk about it
提示词 behave well
be good to ， help with make noise， litter hope， follow， try to be
对每个人来说，举止得体是很重要的．It's+形容词 to do sth做某事是…的． 【高分句型二】
We should also pay attention to the table manners． 我们也应该注意餐桌礼仪．pay attention to 注意… 【解答】Advice for Good Manners
It's important for everyone to behave well．【高分句型一】（点题）
We should be good to our family． It is our duty to help with housework． We should also pay attention to the table manners．【高分句型二】 When we eat with the old， we should let them eat first．．We should also behave well in public． We shouldn't make noise in the library． Give our seats to people in need when we are on the buses．It is necessary to speak politely to the old． We should never litter everywhere．（具体如何表现）
I hope we can follow the rules and try to be a person with good manners．（呼吁大家做个有礼貌的人）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．
25．某网站论坛在为\"我和我的家乡\"征稿。假如你是Helen，来自一个中国的小镇。请你根据下面的思维导图写一篇英语短文，介绍一下你所居住的小镇，以吸引更多的外国游客前来体验游玩。
要求：1.80﹣100词，可适当发挥。开头已给出，不计入总词数。2.至少使用两个含有比较级或最高级的句子。（参考词供你选用：be famous for，watch the scenery，the beautiful mountain，the clean water，the fresh air，outdoor activities，eat natural food in a farmer's house，stay in a farmer 's house，be cheap，quiet life，…） My town
风景（scenery） 优美（山水等） 空气清新
户外活动（垂钓、登山）
体验农家生活（吃农家饭、住农家院等）
. 【分析】【高分句型一】
All in all，it's a good place to visit.总而言之，这是一个旅游的好地方。 a good place to do sth做某事的好地方。 【高分句型二】
Welcome to my town.欢迎来到我的城市。 Welcome to…欢迎到……
【解答】Hi，everyone!I'm Wang Tao，from a small town.My town is famous for its beautiful scenery.It has a river with the clearest water.It also has the loveliest mountain.（风景）You can fish in the river or climb the mountain.You can enjoy the freshest air here.（空气和户外活动）You can eat farm food，stay at a farmer's house and enjoy the happiness and quiet life of the countryside.（体验农家生活）What's more，you'll find everything here much cheaper.
（购物）All in all，it's a good place to visit.【高分句型一】Welcome to my town.【高分句型二】（总结全文）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
26．在初三的英语学习中，你认识了很多名人。21世纪英文报正面向初三学生征稿，要求介绍一位你最喜爱的名人。你草拟了提纲，请根据提纲用英语写一篇短文参加投稿。 注意事项：
（1）短文根据提纲自拟，要求语句通顺，意思连贯，符合题意； （2）提供的人名非限定性内容，仅供参考；
（3）词数在90个左右，短文开头已经给出，不计入总词数； （4）短文必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。
【分析】【高分句型一】
She spent her last few years working closely with UNICEF.她在生命的最后几年与联合国儿童基金会密切合作。
spend…doing sth花费……做某事。 【高分句型二】
I like her not only for her success in films but for her efforts in charity work. 我喜欢她不仅是因为她在电影上的成功，还因为她在慈善工作上的努力。 not only…but also…不仅……而且……
【解答】My favourite person is Audrey Hepburn.（最喜爱的人） She is a great beauty， a great actress and a great humanitarian. Her beauty brought her to the attention of a famous French writer. From then on， she started to play the lead role in many films. Her achievements went beyond the film industry. She began to work for UNICEF later. She spent her last few years working closely with UNICEF.【高分句型一】 Hepburn Won many awards because of her efforts in this area.（描述最喜欢的人）I like her not only for her success in films but for her efforts in charity work. 【高分句型二】（喜欢的原因）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
27．There is a new Wanda Plaza Shopping Mall. You want to go there with your friend Monica and buy some clothes for the New Year Party. Please write an email to her.
1. Introduce（介绍） the new mall， including how to go there. （Bus 82， Underground Line 2， …）
2.Tell her about your favourite place in the mall. 3 .Tell her what clothes you want to buy and why. 注意：
1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
2.语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；请适当发挥； 3.词数80左右，邮件开头已经给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Monica，
I am very happy to tell you there is a new shopping mall near our school. All the best， Linda
【分析】【高分句型一】
There are all kinds of clothes suitable for students， which give us more choices. 有各种各样适合学生穿的衣服，给了我们更多的选择。定语从句 【高分句型二】
I want to buy a uniform， because the new year is an important festival， wearing a uniform will be more formal.
我想买一套制服，因为新年是一个重要的节日，穿制服会比较正式。want to do sth想做某事
【解答】Dear Monica，
I am very happy to tell you there is a new shopping mall near our school.It's name is Wanda Plaza Shopping Mall.You can get there by Bus 82 or by underground Line 2. In this shopping center， there are all kinds of beautiful clothes. I like the student counter best. There are all kinds of clothes suitable for students， which give us more choices. （喜欢的理由）【高分句型一】I want to buy a uniform， because the new year is an important festival， wearing a uniform will be more formal. （想买什么东西）【高分句型二】What about you？ What do you want to buy？ Come with me.
All the best，
Linda
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．
28．Many schools across the world have started online lessons because of COVID﹣19． Your e﹣friend Danny in the UK is curious about your online lessons and writes to ask you about it． Please read his email and write back to him． Dear Sunny
How are you going these days？ I've just heard that we're going to have online lessons next week． Can you tell me how your online lessons are going？ How many lessons do you have in a day？ What about your homework？ What do you think of your online lessons？ Hope to receive your reply soon! Yours， Danny 注意：
1．文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称：
2．语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范：
3．词数 80 左右，信的开头与结尾已经给出，不计入总词数． Dear Danny，
We have already come back to school and life at school is almost the same as before except that we have to wear masks all day．
It was really a very special experience． ． Anyway， online lessons helped us go through the hardest time． We'll keep it in mind forever．
Yours， Sunny
【分析】【高分句型一】
I think online classes have many advantages．我认为在线课程有很多优点． I think+并与出口． 【高分句型二】
This prevents people from touching each other．这可以防止人们互相接触． prevent…from doing sth阻止…做某事． 【解答】Dear Danny，
We have already come back to school and life at school is almost the same as before except that we have to wear masks all day．It was really a very special experience．Now let me tell you how your online lessons are going．（点题）
We have seven classes a day， four in the morning and three in the afternoon．（一天几节课）The teachers show homework online．Students hand in their homework through computers and mobile phones．Then the teacher checks it and returns it to the students．（关于家庭作业）I think online classes have many advantages．【高分句型一】Students can have classes at home instead of going to school．This prevents people from touching each other．．【高分句型二】In addition， the teachers and students can share teaching resources each other．（我对网课的看法）
Anyway， online lessons helped us go through the hardest time． We'll keep it in mind forever．（总结全文）
Yours， Sunny
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．
29．你在英国的笔友Tom最近很苦恼，写信向你求助．请结合所给背景新闻，根据Tom的来信，写一封回信帮助他． 注意：
1．回信必须解决来信提及的全部问题，并结合新闻作适当发挥． 2．语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范． 3．词数80左右，信件的开头已为你写出，不计入总词数．
Dear Lin Tao，
I'm so worried these days． Perhaps you've known the news． Is Maths really so important？ How can I learn Maths well？ I have difficulty learning it． What should I do？ Can you offer me some suggestions？ Hope to hear from you soon．
Yours Tom
Dear Tom，
It's a pity that British pupils were 3 years behind Chinese in Maths． I think Maths is of great importance to us and we must try to study it well． In fact， learning Maths well is not so difficult． First， listen to your teacher carefully and take notes in class． This is the most important for you． Then， you'd better do some exercises to practice sums in your spare time． Last， believe yourself． If you keep trying， nothing is impossible． Of course， you'll face some difficulties． Don't worry! Surely your teacher and classmates can give you a helping hand．
Follow these steps， you'll love Maths and finally be good at it．． ．
Best wishes Lin Tao
【分析】高分句型一
I think Maths is of great importance to us and we must try to study it well．我认为数学对我们很重要，我们必须好好学习．这是一个宾语从句，I hope是主句，后面的是宾语从句． 高分句型二
If you keep trying， nothing is impossible．如果你继续努力，没有什么是不可能的． 这是
if引导的条件状语从句，如果……． 【解答】Dear Tom，
It's a pity that British pupils were 3 years behind Chinese in Maths． I think Maths is of great importance to us and we must try to study it well【高分句型一，注意宾语从句的使用】．【开头点明主题】
In fact， learning Maths well is not so difficult． First， listen to your teacher carefully and take notes in class． This is the most important for you． Then， you'd better do some exercises to practice sums in your spare time． Last， believe yourself． If you keep trying， nothing is impossible【高分句型二，注意if引导的条件状语从句的使用】． Of course， you'll face some difficulties． Don't worry! Surely your teacher and classmates can give you a helping hand．【正文部分详细介绍怎么学数学】
Follow these steps， you'll love Maths and finally be good at it． 【结尾紧扣主题】
Best wishes Lin Tao
【点评】本篇写作需注意要求中所提供的要点，不可遗漏．需在平时积累相关的词汇，写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系．上下文之间可以适当使用连接词．如but， so，then等．
30．Everyone has his or her interests and hobbies.
Please write a short passage within 50 words about one of your hobbies and why you like it， .
【分析】【高分句型一】
Also，I take part in all kinds of sports in order to become stronger． 此外，我参加各种体育活动来增强体质．in order to 为了，目的是 【高分句型二】
All in all，the more I exercise， the healthier I'll be．
总之，我锻炼得越多，我就越健康．the +比较级，the+比较级，越……越…… 【解答】
My hobby
My hobby is to play sports．Here are the reasons for taking part in sports．（开篇点题）I usually play sports when I feel tired after study． I just want to relax myself and have fun．（锻炼可以使人放松，有乐趣） Also，I take part in all kinds of sports in order to become stronger．【高分句型一】（变得更强壮） What's more，I want to be slim and pretty by doing sports．（变得漂亮）
All in all，the more I exercise， the healthier I'll be．【高分句型二】
【点评】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文．它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力．所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数．
31．假如你叫Linda，今年12岁， 要参加学校正在举办的\"健康形象大使（Health Image Ambassador）．竞选， 请用英语写一篇竞选稿， 内容包括如下信息： Linda Self introduction Diet and lifestyle
Your hobbies
Clothes you like wearing
注意：1．表达中必须包含所给要点并进行适当发挥． 2．词数：90词左右．开头已给出， 不计入总词数， 3．文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名和地名等信息，
Hello， everyone． My name is Linda． I'm 12 year old．________________________． 【分析】【高分句型一】
I like dancing， reading and playing badminton．
我喜欢跳舞、阅读和打羽毛球．like doing sth喜欢做某事． 【高分句型二】
And I am a member of the school dancing team． 我是学校舞蹈队的一员．be a member of…的一个成员．
【解答】Hello， everyone． My name is Linda． I'm 12 year old． I'm in Class One Grade Seven．（个人信息） I like dancing， reading and playing badminton．【高分句型一】 I am good at dancing． And I am a member of the school dancing team．【高分句型二】（爱好） I need to keep fit， so healthy food is important for me． I often eat fruit and vegetables and seldom eat cakes or sweets． Every morning I get up early． After breakfast I walk to school． I do morning exercises every day． In the afternoon， I often do after﹣school activities with my classmates． Usually I go to bed at about nine o'clock every night．（生活方式） I like wearing the school uniform， because I look smart in it．（喜欢穿什么）
So you see I live a very healthy life． Please vote for me． Thank you！（总结全文） 【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．
32．
New Members Wanted!
Support our work by becoming a member
Sunshine Middle School is looking for new members to join Animal Club， Nature Club and DIY Club． And you have the idea of joining just ONE club． You need to make a choice and then write an application letter to our chairperson． Be sure to include： introduction of yourself
the reasons why you choose the club（at least two reasons） your abilities and your free time
注意：词数 80 左右．短文须包括所有内容要点，适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺； 开头已给，不计入总词数． Dear chairperson，
I am Jane from Sunshine Middle School． I would like to join the
Yours sincerely， Jane 【分析】【高分句型一】
And I think animals are man's best friends．我认为动物是人类最好的朋友．这是一个宾语从句，I think 是主句，后面的是宾语从句． 【高分句型二】
I will be very happy if I can become a member of your club．如果我能成为你们俱乐部的一员，我会很高兴的． 这是if引导的条件状语从句，如果……． 【解答】Dear chairperson，
I am Jane from Sunshine Middle School． I would like to join the Animal Club．
I'm a student of Grade 8．I'm hard﹣working and always ready to help others．【要点一，介绍自己】I'm very interested in animals．And I think animals are men's best friends，every one of us should do something to help protect the animals．And I would love to learn more knowledge about animals．I have several dogs and cats as pets at home． What's more， I rescued a cat on the way home before． 【要点二，理由】I am free on weekends．I will be very happy if I can become a member of your club．【高分句型二】 You can call me at 0512﹣66688999． 【要点三，能力和空闲时间】 Yours sincerely， Jane
【点评】本篇写作需注意要求中所提供的要点，不可遗漏．需在平时积累相关的词汇，写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系．上下文之间可以适当使用连接词．如but， so，then等．
33．假设你是来自澳大利亚的学生 Henry 在阳光中学七（1）班进行交流学习，请 根据你的 happiness chart 向在澳大利亚的父母描述一下 你在中国的校园生活． Henry's happiness chart
Love
Subject
Homework
Like Dislike
Teachers &classmate
Sports
Classmates &library
注意：
1．文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
2．语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；可适当发挥；
3．词数 80 左右，邮件开头与结尾已经给出，不计入总词数． Dear dad and mum，
I am very happy to tell you something about my school life in China．________________． All the best，
Henry
【分析】【高分句型一】
I like all the subjects，because they are very interesting．
我喜欢所有的科目，因为它们很有趣．because引导原因状语从句． 【高分句型二】
I think my school life is very fun．
我认为我的学校生活很有趣．I think+宾语从句． 【解答】Dear dad and mum，
I am very happy to tell you something about my school life in China．（点题）
My teachers are friendly to me，so I love them very much．My classmates often help me，so I like to play with them．I like all the subjects，because they are very interesting． 【高分句型一】I have to do homework after school，so I dislike it．I love sports，so I often play it with friends after class．（具体描述喜欢和不喜欢的） In all，I think my school life is very fun．【高分句型二】（总结全文） All the best． Henry
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．
34．News from TEENS：
There will be some new changes in China's education system since this fall．One of the biggest changes will be a greater focus on traditional Chinese culture．According to the new standards，students will be recommended to recite 72 ancient poems and other writings．Students will be asked to read more classical literature（古典文学）． Students in your grade have a discussion about the news．Here are their opinions．
Opinions about greater focus on traditional Chinese culture Disagree
• It's difficult to recite so many poems and other
writings．
• We don't have enough time to read or recite．
Agree
• It's our duty to learn about traditional Chinese
culture．
• Classical literature can bring us cultural
confidence．
Your opinion（s）：
…
What do you think of the changes？Do you agree it's necessary to pay much attention to
traditional Chinese culture？Write a short passage to express your ideas． 注意：
1．文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称； 2．语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范； 3．词数80左右，文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数．
It's said that there will be some new changes in China's education system since this fall．One of the biggest changes will be a greater focus on traditional Chinese culture． Different people have different opinions．Here are their opinions．
Some think few students can recite 72 ancient poems and other writings．Because it's difficult to recite so many poems and other writings．Most of students are busy studying，so they don't have enough time to read or recite．
Others think it is a good idea．They think it's our duty to learn about traditional Chinese culture．Also，classical literature can bring us cultural confidence． In my opinion ，it is good to recite some ancient poems properly，but don't impose on the students．We should learn according to our own interests． 【分析】【高分句型一】
Because it's difficult to recite so many poems and other writings．因为背诵这么多诗歌和其他作品是很困难的．
it is+形容词 to do sth做某事是…的． 【高分句型二】
They think it's our duty to learn about traditional Chinese culture．他们认为学习中国传统文化是我们的责任．
They think+宾语从句；it's one's duty to do sth做某事是某人的职责．
【解答】It's said that there will be some new changes in China's education system since this fall．One of the biggest changes will be a greater focus on traditional Chinese culture．Different people have different opinions．Here are their opinions．（点题，引出下文）
Some think few students can recite 72 ancient poems and other writings．Because it's difficult to recite so many poems and other writings．【高分句型一】Most of students are busy studying，so they don't have enough time to read or recite．（反对观点）
Others think it is a good idea．They think it's our duty to learn about traditional Chinese culture．【高分句型二】Also，classical literature can bring us cultural confidence．（赞成观点）
In my opinion ，it is good to recite some ancient poems properly，but don't impose on the students．We should learn according to our own interests．（我的观点）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．
35．
Dear boys and girls，
It is our duty to make our city a better place to live． However， we can see some bad behavior（行为） around us． Let's write an article to encourage our citizens（市民） to take action and make our city a greener place． The following pictures may help you．
注意：1． 次数 80 左右，注意分段，短文的题目和开头已写好，不计入总词数； 2． 请结合图片信息进行描述并适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺．
3． 短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息． 参考词汇：公共交通：public transport；节约用电：save the power
How to make our city greener
It is our duty to make our city greener． ．
【分析】【高分句型一】
We can avoid the traffic jams and reduce the air pollution by riding bikes or walking．通过骑自行车或步行，这样就可以避免交通阻塞，减少空气污染．
and是并列连词，连接的是两个相同的谓语，by是介词，意思是\"通过某组织方式\"． 【高分句型二】
We should recycle something that can be reused．我们应该回收可以再利用的东西． that引导定语从句．
【解答】How to make our city greener It is our duty to make our city greener．（点题）
As students，it's our duty to help build a green city．We can avoid the traffic jams and reduce the air pollution by riding bikes or walking．【高分句型一】We should turn off the lights when leaving． （随手关灯）We should also save water and paper． （节约用水和纸）We should recycle something that can be reused．【高分句型二】（循环利用）Try to walk or take a bike to school． （绿色出行）We mustn't throw rubbish or spit anywhere．（不能扔垃圾和随地吐痰）In this way，we can keep our city clean and tidy so that we can live a comfortable life．And we'd better plant more trees to protect the environment and make our city beautiful．（多植树） In a word，everyone can play a part in building our city．（总结全文）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．
36．今年年初，无锡被评为2013年度内地最宜居城市．假设你班对此进行了一次班级讨论，请你在答题卡指定的位置上用英语写一篇80词左右的发言稿，阐述你的观点和感
想．内容提示如下：
1．政府修建了很多新路，大桥，甚至还有地铁；
2．新添了很多露天开放公园，每到周末和节假日，人们常常去那里野餐，游玩； 3．私家车越来越多，停车（park cars）已成了大问题； 4．城市变化有利有弊； 5．你的希望． 注意：
1．短文须包括所给内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯； 2．第5要点的内容须用2～3句话展开合理想象，作适当发挥； 3．发言稿的开头已给出，不计入总词数．
There have been great changes in Wuxi in the past few years． The government has built lots of new roads，bridges and even undergrounds．There have been a number of openparks．People often go there to have a picnic and have fun on weekends and holidays．More and more people have their own cars and it's become difficult to park cars．The changes have brought both advantages and disadvantages．I hope the government can deal with the problem．Our hometown can be more and more beautiful in the future． ．
【分析】这是一篇提纲作文．内容是谈谈你对无锡被评为2013年度内地最宜居城市的观点和感想．时态主要为一般现在时和现在完成时．人称主要为第三人称． 写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文． 其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点： 1．政府修建了很多新路，大桥，甚至还有地铁；
2．新添了很多露天开放公园，每到周末和节假日，人们常常去那里野餐，游玩； 3．私家车越来越多，停车（park cars）已成了大问题； 4．城市变化有利有弊； 5．你的希望． 常用到的重点短语： a number of 大量的 have fun 玩的开心 both…and…两者都 deal with 处理
比较级+and+比较级 越来越… 【高分句型】
1．People often go there to have a picnic and have fun on weekends and holidays． to have a picnic and have fun 动词不定式做目的状语．
2．①More and more people have their own cars and②it's become difficult to park cars． ①比较级+and+比较级 越来越…
②it是形式主语，后面的动词不定式是真正主语．
【解答】There have been great changes in Wuxi in the past few years．The government has built lots of new roads，bridges and even undergrounds．（政府修建了很多新路，大桥，甚至还有
地铁）There have been a number of open parks．People often go there to have a picnic and have fun on weekends and holidays．【高分句型】（新添了很多露天开放公园，每到周末和节假日，人们常常去那里野餐，游玩）More and more people have their own cars and it's become difficult to park cars．【高分句型】（私家车越来越多，停车已成了大问题）The changes have brought both advantages and disadvantages．（城市变化有利有弊；）I hope the government can deal with the problem．Our hometown can be more and more beautiful in the future．（我的希望）
【点评】本文是一篇给材料作文，短文的开头已经给出．写作时先要围绕这些要点组织材料，确定写作内容，注意将这些要点全部表达出来，并且要有适当的发挥，在谈到自己的观点时，要结合活动内容，写出自己的观点．
37．请你就\"什么是世界上最伟大的发明\"这个主题，发表一下看法，内容包括：1）按照你的观点，什么是世界上最伟大的发明？2）你为什么这么认为？3）你平时经常用 这个发明来做什么？（要求意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于 60 词） 提示词语：opinion，invention， because， help，
提示问题： 1）In your opinion， what is the greatest invention in the world？ 2）Why do you think so？
3）What do you often do with the invention？ ______．
【分析】【高分句型一】
What's more， they can help solve problems and make students learn more．更重要的是，他们可以帮助解决问题，使学生学习更多．help do sth表示帮着做某事．
【高分句型二】
It is important for us to use computers properly．正确使用电脑对我们很重要．
it is important for sb to do sth表示对某人来说做某事很重要．
【解答】In your opinion， the computer is the greatest invention in the world．（最重要的发明是什么）They have changed the world and played an important role in our daily life． People can shop online if they don't want to go out．What's more， they can help solve problems and make students learn more． 【高分句型一】Students can watch English videos and learn spoken English．（原因）
It is important for us to use computers properly． 【高分句型二】I often use it to look up information． We should use it to study rather than play games．（我经常用它做什么）
That's all! Thank you!
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．
38．澳大利亚此次发生了特大丛林火灾，火势蔓延了四分之一的国土．请认真阅读以下导图，用英文写一篇短文，贴在 School Newsletter 上．
Big fires
Possible causes （原因）： ●humans' activities ●… Facts：
●hot， dry， less rain ●bush fires， forest fires Results：
●800 buildings fell down ●animals like koalas died ●thick fog everywhere Your feelings： …
注意事项：1．短文内容须包括导图要点，要求表达清楚、语法正确、适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2．词数在 80 个左右，首尾已在答题卷上给出，不计入总词数； 3．短文必须写在答题卷指定的位置上． __________________________________________． 【分析】【高分句型一】
If someone smokes in the forest， it can easily lead to forest fires． 如果有人在森林里吸烟，很容易导致森林火灾．if引导条件状语从句． 【高分句型二】
I hope people should strengthen the forest protection， so that such a disaster will not happen again．
我希望人们应该加强森林保护，这样灾难就不会再发生了．I hope+宾语从句．so that引导目的状语从句．
【解答】Australia has been hit by big fires that have spread across a quarter of the country．（点题）
I think there may be two main reasons． First， it may be caused by humans' activities．Second， it may be caused by the weather．（主要原因）It's summer in Australia now． It is very hot and there is less rain，so the forest is very dry．If someone smokes in the forest， it can easily lead to forest fires．【高分句型一】（条件）The forest fires have made 800 buildings fell down，a lot of animals like koalas died．The thick fog is everywhere．The environmental pollution in Australia is very serious．（结果）
I feel sorry about this． I hope people should strengthen the forest protection， so that such a disaster will not happen again．【高分句型二】（感谢）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．
39．假如你是Helen，在网上看到了Wildlife Protection Club （野生动物保护俱乐部）招募成员的广告．请认真阅读下面的广告，并根据邮件中的内容用英语写一封信给俱乐部主席，申请加入该俱乐部，请根据信息提示完成申请信．
Your information：
1．Who are you？ （a student，Grade 8） 2．What are you like？ （ patient，helpful） 3．What's your hobby？ （ like animals； ……） 4．Why would you like to join us？
5．How to contact （联系） you？ （TEL：0510﹣8555868；E﹣mail：Helen@163．com） 注意：1．词数80，信的开头和结尾已写好，不计入总词数； 2．信须包括所有要点，并适当发挥；
3．不得透露班级、学校、姓名等任何真实个人信息． Dear Mr．Chairperson，
I read about Wildlife Protection Club yesterday．
I am looking forward to hearing from you．
Yours sincerely，
Helen
【分析】【高分句型一】
I will be very happy if I can be a member of your club．
if引导条件状语从句．这句话的意思：如果我能成为你们俱乐部的成员，我会很高兴．【高分句型二】 【高分句型二】
I am looking forward to hearing from you．
look forward to doing sth期待做某事．这句话的意思：我期待着收到你的来信． 【解答】Dear Mr．Chairperson，
I read about Wildlife Protection Club yesterday and I would like to join it．（点题）
I am a student of Grade 8．（年级） I am very patient and helpful．（性格） I loved animals when I was very young．I would like to learn more about animals．And I hope to do something for animals．（爱好）
I will be very happy if I can be a member of your club．【高分句型一】Please call me on 0510﹣8555868 or e﹣mail me at Helen@163．com．（联系方式） I am looking forward to hearing from you．（期待）【高分句型二】
Yours sincerely，
Helen
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．
40．请根据所给提示以\"My friend Simon\"为题，写一篇短文介绍你的好朋友Simon，包括以下要点．13岁，来自美国但是现在和家人居住在扬州．学习刻苦，最喜欢的科目是数学和英语，是校足球队成员，周末经常和同学去踢球，经常观看足球比赛，最喜欢的球员是姚明．
注意：（1）要点清楚，语言流畅，字数80词左右
（2）短文须包括所有要点内容，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥短发，带眼镜，又高又瘦．擅长电脑．
【分析】【高分句型一】
He studies so hard that he always gets good grades．
他学习很努力，总是取得好成绩．so…that…如此…以至于… 【高分句型二】
He wants to be a basketball player like Yao Ming when he grows up．
长大后想成为像姚明那样的篮球运动员．when引导时间状语从句．want to be想成为… 【解答】My friend Simon
I have a good friend．His name is Simon．He is 13 years old．He comes from America．He now lives in Yangzhou with his family．（基本信息）He studies so hard that he always gets good grades． 【高分句型一】His favorite subjects are math and English．（学习）He is a member of the school football team．On weekends， he often plays football and watches football matches with his classmates（周末做什么）．His favorite player is Yao Ming．He wants to be a basketball player like Yao Ming when he grows up．【高分句型二】（最喜欢的球员） 【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．
41．我们日常的课本学习不仅能学到知识，而且也会改善着我们的生活习惯．请根据下面
表格提供的信息，以\"My Changes\"为题用英语写一篇短文，向同学介绍你的变化并简要说明理由．
过去 现在
1．痴迷游戏 2．讨厌看书
1．喜欢旅行，……（至少举一个例子） 2．爱好看书，……（至少举一个例子）
原因
1．旅游帮你了解世界，享受自然之美．
2．获取知识，使人聪明，带给人快乐，……（至少写一点）
注意：1．文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称； 2．语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范； 3．词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数．
My Changes
_______．
【分析】高分句型一：
I find travelling can help me learn about the world and enjoy the beauty of nature．我发现旅行能帮我们了解世界欣赏自然的美．find后加省略了that的宾语从句． 高分句型二：
It's helpful for us to have meaningful activities．对于我们来说有意义活动是有帮助的．it is+adj+for sb+to do sth对某人来说做某事是怎么样的，it是形式主语，动词不定式做真正主语．
【解答】My Changes
In the past I wasted a lot of food．I used to spend much time playing computer games． I didn't like reading books at all．（过去）
But now I have changed a lot．I save water and food． I like reading and travelling．I can save my pocket money to buy books or borrow books from the library． （现在的情况）I find travelling can help me learn about the world and enjoy the beauty of nature．【高分句型一】 I have fun reading books and get a lot of knowledge from books． Good books are good friends． Good books open up a whole new world to us．It's helpful for us to have meaningful activities．【高分句型二】（原因）
【点评】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文．它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力．所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数．
42．为了交流学习经验，提高学习效率，学校英语校报正在举办以\"How to be good friends\" 为题的征文比赛，请你踊跃投稿．
注意：1．词数80左右．征文的开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数； 2．征文须包括以下内容；
*好朋友要善良、有礼貌、乐于帮助有困难的人；
*好朋友要愿意和你分享快乐，替你保守秘密；
*好朋友不一定非要有相同的爱好，但一定要对你的学业有帮助； *……（至少写一点自己的观点） 3．可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺．
How to be good friends？
If you want to make good friends with others，be one．But how can we be good friends？ First，_________________________________________________________． I hope all these will be helpful to us． 【分析】【高分句型一】
I think a good friend should be kind and polite．
我认为一个好朋友应该是善良和有礼貌的．I think+宾语从句． 【高分句型二】
Fourth，when you are in trouble，good friends will always be with you．
第四，当你有困难的时候，好朋友会一直和你在一起．when引导时间状语从句． 【解答】How to be good friends？
If you want to make good friends with others，be one，But how can we be good friends？（点题）
First，I think a good friend should be kind and polite．【高分句型一】He or she should be ready to help others when are in need．（好朋友要善良、有礼貌、乐于帮助有困难的人） Second，good friends should be willing to share their joy with you．And they can keep secrets for you．（好朋友要愿意和你分享快乐，替你保守秘密）Third，good friends don't have to share the same hobby，but they should be able to help you with your lessons．（好朋友不一定非要有相同的爱好，但一定要对你的学业有帮助） Fourth，when you are in trouble，good friends will always be with you．【高分句型二】（遇到困境，好朋友不离不弃） I hope all these will be helpful to us．（希望）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．
43．Suzy的妈妈给她买了几条金鱼，但是她不知道应该怎么养．Suzy向她的朋友李华咨询这方面的知识．假如你是李华，请你给Suzy写一封邮件，邮件中包括以下内容： 养金鱼并不难 了解金鱼的特点
1．金鱼通常不大，但是有的能长到20公分（centimeter）；
2．大多数金鱼是橘色、黑色或白色； 3．精心照顾可以活很久
注意饲养的方法
1．你要确保水的洁净； 2．不要把金鱼放在太阳下面；
3．不要用手抓金鱼； 4．……（自拟一条）
注意：1．词数70左右．短文的开头已经写好，不计入总词数；
2．短文须包括所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺． ______________． 【分析】【高分句型一】
If you take good care of them，they can live a long time．
如果你好好照顾他们，他们可以活得很长．if 如果，引导条件状语从句．take good care of照顾，关心 【高分句型二】
You should make sure the water is clean and don' t put them under the sun．
你应该确保水是干净的，不要把它们放在太阳下面．make sure确保，后跟宾语从句． 【解答】Dear Suzy，
I'm glad to hear that your mum bought you some goldfish．
Goldfish are easy to look after．（养金鱼并不难）They are usually small，but some of them can grow up to be 20 centimeters long．Most goldfish are orange，black，or white．If you take good care of them，they can live a long time．【高分句型一】（金鱼的特点）You should make sure the water is clean and don' t put them under the sun．【高分句型二】Also，don't pick them up with your hands．You needn't feed them often．（饲养的方法） I believe you can do well． Li Hua
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．
44．这学期你们学校组织同学们开展了一个\"争做文明市民\"的活动．同学们在人际交往、社会公德等方面都比以前有了很大的进步．请你根据下表所提示的要点，以\" To be a civilized citizen\" 为题，写一篇英语短文，介绍同学们的表现，并谈谈你对这个活动的看法． 表现
人际交往
尊重他人 诚信友善 礼貌待人 乐于助人
社会公德
遵守交规 爱护环境 热心慈善 （自拟一点）
感受
你对这个活动的看法（自拟，至少一点）
注意：1．词数90左右．短文开头部分已为你写好，不计入总词数； 2．短文需包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺； 3．短文中不要出现具体的校名和人名．
To be a civilized citizen
Our school organized an educational activity called \"To be a civilized citizen\" this term． All the students took part in this activity and they have improved a lot in many
ways．__________________________________________________________________． 【分析】【高分句型一】
They know it's important to respect the old and care for the young．
他们知道尊老爱幼是重要的．①know后是省略了that的宾语从句．②it's+adj+to do sth 做某事是怎样的，it是形式主语，动词不定式是真正主语． 【高分句型二】
They are always patient enough to listen to others about the joy and worries．
他们总是有足够的耐心去倾听他人的快乐和担忧．adj+enough to do sth足够怎样去做某事．
【解答】To be a civilized citizen
Our school organized an educational activity called \"To be a civilized citizen\" this term． All the students took part in this activity and they have improved a lot in many ways．（点题） It's really nice to see the students being polite now．They know it's important to respect the old and care for the young．【高分句型一】They also realize they should have good manners and be honest．As a result，they are always friendly to others．Moreover，they are willing to help people any time．When they are on the bus，they always give their seats to people in need．They are always patient enough to listen to others about the joy and worries【高分句型二】．（人际交往）
Now the students don't just care about themselves．They tell others it's very necessary to follow the traffic rules．They also protect the environment．They spend their spare time on the charity activities．They often raise money to help the poor students in our school．（社会公德） I'm glad to find the students have learnt a lot from this activity．I will learn from them and try to be a civilized citizen as well．（感受）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．
45．假定你是苏海，你的美国朋友David给你发了下面的邮件，请仔细阅读邮件并根据信中的内容和生活实际用英语回复，可适当发挥．
To：suhai@163．com From：david@hotmail．com Subject：relationship
Dear Su Hai，
I have a problem and I don't know how to deal with it．I have two elder sisters． They're both clever and always do everything well．I feel I can never be as good as them． I am worried about the following problems these days．Can you give me some help？ ◆Should I just be myself or make a change？ ◆How can I let my parents feel proud of me？ ◆Can you share one of your experiences with me？
Best wishes， David
注意：1．词数90左右．短文的开头已经写好，不计入总词数．
2．短文须包含所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺． 3．短文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息． Dear David，
Thanks for your email．I'm very sorry to hear that ． I hope my answers will be of some help to you．
Best wishes，
Su Hai
【分析】【高分句型一】
You'd better not compare yourself to your sisters．你最好不要和你的姐妹们比较． had better do sth最好做某事． 【高分句型二】
But I do my best to work hard．但我尽我最大的努力工作． do one's best to do sth尽某人最大努力做某事． 【解答】Dear David
Thanks for your email．I m very sorry to hear that you are very worried these days．（表示同情）
You'd better not compare yourself to your sisters．【高分句型一】I think you just need to be yourself instead of trying to be like someone else．Remember that you and your sisters are all smart in different ways．Develop your own interests，and don't be afraid to fail．You can be as special as your sisters are．In fact，parents love each child．I think they will understand you and feel proud of you．（建议）
My brother often does better in study than me．But I do my best to work hard．【高分句型二】My parents understand me and they often give me help．It doesn't matter who is the best．The most important thing is we should be ourselves and never give up．Then we will feel much better．（分享自己的经历）
I hope my answers will be of some help to you（希望）
Best wishes．
Su Hai
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．
46．下面是某一英文报上刊登的一封读者来信，请你给这位中学生写封回信． Dear editor，
I have a big problem now．You see，I am a little shy．Sometimes I really don't know whom I should ask for help when I am in trouble．I am always afraid that I will disturb（打扰）them What should I do？Can you give me some advice？
Yours， Lucy 要求：
1．回信的内容要包括以下要点： （1）首先要学会与人交流，多交朋友；
（2）可以求助于同学和朋友，因为年龄相仿，容易相互理解； （3）可以求助于老师和家长，因为他们愿意帮你，也懂得更多． 2．为了使文章连贯，可适当增加内容．
3．词数90左右．信的开头与结尾已写好，不计入总词数． Dear Lucy，
What you said is common with some middle school students．Here is my advice． Yours， Peter．
【分析】高分句型一：
First，you should learn how to communicate with others and make as many friends as possible． 句中使用短语有：\"communicate with sb 跟某人沟通\"、\"make friends 交朋友\"、\"as…as possible 尽可能…\"．这句话意为：首先，你应该学习怎么跟别人交流，尽可能多的交朋友． 高分句型二：
Besides，you can also tell your teachers or parents about your trouble and ask them for help． 句中使用短语有：\"tell sb about sth 告诉某人关于某事\"、\"ask sb for help 向某人寻求帮助\"．这句话意为：另外，你可以告诉老师或父母你的问题，并向他们寻求帮助． 【解答】Dear Lucy，
What you said is common with some middle school students．Here is my advice．（开篇点题）
First，you should learn how to communicate with others and make as many friends as possible．【高分句型一】Then when you are in trouble，you can ask your classmates or friends for help because they are the same age as you．I think you can understand each other easily．Besides，you can also tell your teachers or parents about your trouble and ask them for help．【高分句型二】You see，they are always ready to help you．What's more，they know more about the problems．（提出建议）
I hope you think my advice is worth taking and can get better soon．（表达祝福） Yours， Peter
【点评】写作文时要注意平时语言的积累，避免出现语法错误，写作时注意条理清楚，语意通畅．
47．假如你是Sandy，想邀请美国交流生Tommy来苏州游玩，了解苏州文化．请根据以下要求完成一封邀请信，信中向 Tommy介绍苏州及你所安排的一些活动．
苏州概况 1．位于中国东部，距离上海约90公里； 2．有许多名胜，是旅游的好地方； 3．…（自拟一点）
活动安排 1．参观苏州园林； 2．品尝当地美食； 3．购买精美礼物； 4．…（自拟一点）
要求：1．短文必须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺； 2．词数90左右，文章开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数； 3．文中不能出现真实的姓名、校名等相关信息． Dear Tommy，
How are you going？I'm writing to invite you to my hometown，Suzhou．I'll tell you something about it and some of the interesting things we'll do when you come here． ．
Welcome to Suzhou!Welcome to my home! Best wishes! Sandy
【分析】【高分句型一】
When you come here，I'll show you around our city．你来的时候，我带你参观我们的城市． when 引导时间状语从句；show sb around …带某人参观…… 【高分句型二】
I am sure you will have a good time．我相信你会玩得很开心． have a good time 玩的开心． 【解答】Dear Tommy，
How are you going？I'm writing to invite you to my hometown，Suzhou．I'll tell you something about it and some of the interesting things we'll do when you come here．Suzhou is located in the east of China，about 90 kilometers away from Shanghai．When you come here，I'll show you around our city．【高分句型一】It has many places of interest and it is a good place to travel．（苏州是旅游的好地方．） We can also enjoy the delicious food．（品尝美食）There are many beautiful gardens in my hometown．The air is fresh and the beautiful flowers are planted and birds' sound can be heard everywhere．（空气清新，鸟语花香）You can buy beautiful gifts for your family in the gift shop．（购买精美礼物）What's more，the people in my hometown are very friendly．I am sure you will have a good time．【高分句型二】
Welcome to Suzhou!Welcome to my home! Best wishes! Sandy
【点评】在写作时要求能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．
48．寒假将至，同学们即将迎来一个快乐的寒假．你的同学Sandy通常是这样度过寒假的，
请你介绍一下Sandy的寒假生活．
健康生活
1）早睡早起；多吃水果和蔬菜，多做运动；
2）常穿棉质衣服和运动鞋．
快乐学习
1）做2小时作业； 2）空余时间读书看报．
庆祝活动
1）和家人团聚吃大餐； 2）与同学聚会开派对．
注意：1．词数90左右．短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数； 2．短文须包括所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺； 3．短文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息． Sandy's Winter Holiday
Hello， I'm happy to tell you something about Sandy's winter holiday． ． 【分析】【高分句型一】
It's important for her to wear clothes made of cotton and comfortable trainers because they are good for health．对她来说，穿棉质的衣服和舒适的运动鞋是很重要的，因为它们有益于健康．
It's important for to do sth对某人来说做某事很重要． be good for 有益于 【高分句型二】
At the same time，she spends two hours doing her homework．同时，她花了两个小时做家庭作业．
sb spend some time doing sth某人花时间做某事 at the same time同时 【解答】Sandy's winter holiday
Hello，I'm happy to tell you something about Sandy's winter holiday．（点题）
She gets up at eight in the morning，and go to sleep at nine in the evening．She eats more healthy food and do more exercise to keep fit．It's important for her to wear clothes made of cotton and comfortable trainers because they are good for health．【高分句型一】（健康生活）
At the same time，she spends two hours doing her homework．【高分句型二】She likes reading，so she also reads some books and newspapers every day．In the afternoon she practices dancing with her friends．（快乐学习）
During the Spring Festival，she has a great party with his classmates． He also has a big dinner with her family to celebrate this most important holiday．She likes to set off fireworks with her parents to celebrate the Spring Festival．I am sure she has a great time on that day．（庆祝活动）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．
49．David参加了一个社区的交友活动，请根据下表所提示的内容，介绍他的新朋友Tom．
学习 爱好
1．爱学习．努力学习，所有学科都学得很好．
2．爱助人．经常帮助同学复习功课． 1．爱运动．篮球打得好，下学期想进入校篮球队．
2．爱动物．养兔子当宠物，并能照顾好．
评价
对Tom的评价（自拟）
要求： （1）词数80左右．短文开头部分已为你写好，不计入总词数； （2）条理清楚，语意连贯；紧扣主题，适当发挥；书写规范，标点正确； （3）短文中不要出现具体的学校姓名和人名． Tom is my new friend． 【分析】【高分句型一】
He is good at all the subjects， so he can always get good grades．他擅长所有的科目，所以他总能取得好成绩． be good at擅长… 【高分句型二】
I think Tom is not only a clever student， but also a very good friend．我认为汤姆不仅是一个聪明的学生，也是一个很好的朋友．
I think+宾语从句；not only…but also…不仅…而且…
【解答】Tom is my new friend． He is twelve years old． He is tall and thin． He is good at all the subjects， so he can always get good grades．【高分句型一】 He often helps me with my English and I often help him with his Chinese．（学习）He loves sports and plays basketball well．He wants to join the school basketball team next term．He also loved animals．He keeps a rabbit as a pet and takes good care of it．（爱好）I think Tom is not only a clever student， but also a very good friend．【高分句型二】I hope we will be friends forever．（我的评价及希望）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．
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（1）短文须根据图表自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意； （2）词数在80个左右，短文首尾已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数； （3）短文必须写在答题卷指定位置上。 【分析】【高分句型一】
This book mainly tells the story of four people who go through hardships and finally reach the Western Paradise and obtain Buddhist the Scriptures.这本书主要讲述了四个人历经艰难困苦，最终到达西天，获得佛经的故事。 who引导的定语从句。 【高分句型二】
My favorite character is Monkey King，not only because he is handsome，but also he is very clever and brave.我最喜欢的角色是孙悟空，不仅因为他英俊，而且他非常聪明和勇敢。 not only…but also…不仅……而且……
【解答】My favorite book is The Journey to the West.It is a book about fairy tales.It's very interesting and its author is Wu Cheng'en.There are four important characters in this book，they are Monk Xuanzang，Monkey King，Pigsy，Sandy. （人物）This book mainly tells the story of four people who go through hardships and finally reach the Western Paradise and obtain Buddhist the Scriptures.【高分句型一】（主要内容）I would like to recommend it to people who like fairy tales.
My favorite character is Monkey King，not only because he is handsome，but also he is very clever and brave. 【高分句型二】I like this book very much，on the one hand，it is very interesting，on the other hand，it teaches me to persevere，no matter how big the difficulty is，we should persevere，only in this way can we succeed.（喜欢的理由）
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