2014北京中考英语作文考前串讲 （一）.五个步骤写好中考英语作文
书面表达是对学生英语学习的综合考查，涉及篇章结构、句型构成、短语应用，单词拼写及标点使用等多方面内容，下面就中考书面表达的写作方法和注意事项进行指导： 一、认真审题，确定时态人称，同时关注题材格式
时态：故事性文章一般用过去时，其中表达感受时可用现在时。 说明性或议论性文章一般用现在时，举例时可用过去时。
根据题目要求也会出现时态的交错使用，如过去和现在的对比等。 如果句中出现了时间状语，时态则要遵循时间状语。 如ago，last…——过去时 next，in…——将来时等
人称：注意在句子中人称的统一。
例如：Thanks to the teachers, we have improved our English. 其中we和our就是人称的统一。 格式：注意书信格式的开头和结尾。
二、找全信息点，紧扣主题，突出重点
切忌只看表格中或所列1、2、3中的信息点。一定把题读全，找齐信息点，建议用铅笔
标出，写完后再涂掉。
根据题目，可适当增加合理内容。 特别注意文章要有开头和结尾。
三、成文时，用词正确，表达地道,文字流畅.
切忌与汉语提示的一一对应，使用所学表达方法将语义表达出来即可。 首先考虑句子结构（如主谓宾，主系表等）。
同时注意短语的正确使用和单词的拼写，最好使用课本上学过的短语和句式。 四、文章结构清晰，重点句型出彩，可使文章在得分上提高一个档次
考虑文章的篇章结构，使用适当的连接短语，使文章结构紧凑。
常用连接词：
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all，Firstly/First，Secondly/Second… And then，Finally，In the end，At last
2.表并列补充关系的：What is more，Besides，Moreover，Furthermore，In addition 3.表转折对比关系的：However，On the contrary，but Although +clause（ 从句），In spite of +n/doing On the one hand… On the other hand… Some…，while others…
4.表因果关系的：Because，As
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So，Thus，Therefore，As a result 5.表换一种方式表达：In other words
6.表进行举例说明：For example，句子；For instance，句子；such as+n /doing 7.表陈述事实：In fact
8.表达自己观点：As far as I know，In my opinion
9.表总结：In short，In a word，In conclusion，In summary
文中正确使用两三个好的句型，如：宾语从句、状语从句、动名词做主语等。 宾语从句举例：I believe Tianjin will be more beautiful and prosperous.
状语从句举例：If everyone does something for the environment, our hometown will become clean and beautiful.
动名词做主语举例：Reading books in the sun is bad for our eyes. It’s bad for our eyes to read books in the sun. 常用状语从句句型：
1）时间when，not…until，as soon as 2）目的so that+clause；to do（ 为了）
3）结果so…that+clause，too…to do（太……以至于……） 4）条件if，unless（除非），as long as（只要） 5）让步though，although，even though，even if no matter what/when/where/who/which/how 6）比较as…as…，not so…as…，than
五、认真检查，检查信息点是否全面，时态、人称是否一致，句子结构是否清晰，短语使用、单词拼写是否准确等。
检查后，将草稿誊写在纸上，请注意按结构分段，书写清晰。 下面列举一些在检查中可发现的错误： 1.We live more and more comfortable. 改正：comfortably（副词修饰动词）
2.ｗe can get many informations by reading newspapers. 改正：much information
（不可数名词由much修饰） 3.There has many programs in TV.
改正：There are many programs on TV. （There be句型和介词短语）
4.I think ride a bike can keep our health.
改正：I think riding a bike can keep us healthy.（动名词作主语）
建议大家练习或模仿不同题材的文章，特别注意改错总结和吸取范文中好的结构与表达方法，适当运用于自己的文章中。
(二)2014中考作文预测
一、写人、记事类 写人：最喜欢的老师
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Dear Mike,
I’m glad to hear from you. At school I have a lot of teachers. But among all of
them ,Miss Li, our English teacher is the most unforgettable one .
Once I was not good at English, especially when I began to learn English. I found it too
difficult. I also became upset easily. I always failed in the exams and almost gave it up. My English teacher, Miss Li, noticed my problem. She had a talk with me patiently and taught me how to learn English well. After that, she spent an hour helping me every day. Little by little, I became interested in English and felt more and more confident. Now I not only do well in English but also try to help others with their English when they are in trouble.
I still remember that because I think I am so proud to be one of Miss Li’s students. I
have learned a lot from her. When I grow up in the future, I hope I will become a teacher like her.
Who do you remember best at school? Write and tell me.
Yours, Li Ming
记事：最难忘的事情
.Dear Mike,
I’m glad to hear from you. Many things happened in the past three years. But I remember one thing best which happened at the last New Year party.
That party would be the last party we would have in this school. We made up our mind to make dumplings in the party. So we, the students, ourselves, brought everything we needed from our homes. And we made the dumplings together. Everyone was very busy and we were so happy that laughter and cheer could always be heard. The most exciting thing was that I could make the dumplings instead of eating only. Even if they were not as beautiful as my teacher made. Just at the moment, I felt that we were such a good class that we were just like a happy family. I was moved so much that I couldn’t help running tears in my eyes. That’s the reason why I remember it best.
How about you? What do you remember best at school? Write and tell me. Yours, Li Ming
结构：
Part1: Among various kinds of things/persons in my mind, …is the most unforgettable one.
Part2: On a sunny/rainy morning, while I was …First of all… Then… After that…In the end…
Part3: he/she/this was one of the most meaningful/enjoyable/unforgettable persons/things that I have ever met/experienced, I will remember him/it forever.
加分句子：
Sth. impressed me greatly
What impressed me most is that…
I admire Helen because she is optimistic about life.
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二．、计划类（暑期计划、高中计划）
结构：
Part1: The summer holiday is coming. I’m going to have a good rest and learn to relax myself.
Part2: First of all, I will read more useful books because reading more books is not only interesting but also can make me learn more knowledge. Then, I will try to spend more time in chatting with my parents and help them to do some housework. After that, I am going to take part in the social activities so that I can know more about the society. In the end, If possible, I’d like to go to Shanghai for a visit.
Part3: I’m sure I’ll have an interesting and meaningful summer holiday.
根据中文提示和英文提示词语，写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的短文。所给英文提示词语供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
今年暑假，你们学校将迎接来自澳大利亚的学生。请你写一篇短文，向他们介绍你心目中的北京：北京最大的变化是什么；介绍两处以上的北京名胜古迹；作为北京人(Beijinger)应该怎样做。
提示词语：change, build, modern city, places of great interest
Beijing is a modern city with a long history. There are many places of great interest in it. Now let me tell you some of them.
The Forbidden City is one of the most popular ones for visitors. It is very big and you can learn much about the history of China from it. The Summer Palace is
beautiful and famous, too. The Great Wall is also a wonderful place to go. And Tian\" anmen Square is a good place for people to take a walk. I hope you will enjoy your staying in Beijing.
四．雾霾
2013年)除夕到正月十五期间，北京雾霾天气出现的天数占到50%以上，严重影响了老百姓的生活和健康。请写一篇短文，描述一下北京雾霾的情况，分析雾霾出现的原因，并提出治理雾霾的措施。
注意：词数不少于100词。 参考范文：
During the 15 days from New Year’s Eve to Lantern Festival, Beijing was affected by smog for more than half the time, because of which people suffered a lot. On the road people drove slowly because they could not see clearly. People also suffered from many illnesses caused by smog.
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The smog in Beijing has been caused by many factors, in which the increase of cars in the city area plays an important role. The cars send off a lot of poisonous gases, which in turn adds to the already serious air pollution.
In my opinion, the number of cars should be limited. We should call on the people to use more public transport. Only in this way can we expect to have more sunny days.
五.健康问题是中考常考的话题，出题形式多样，有必要下苦功掌握。
典型例句
1. It is very important to keep healthy。 2. How can we keep healthy?
3. We can’t go to sleep too late. We can’t get up too late。 4. We should eat the food healthily。 5. We should do more exercise。
6. Last Tuesday I got a cold and had a pain in my head。 7. I didn’t feel like eating anything。 8. I decided to see the doctor。
9. In the doctor’s office, the doctor looks over me carefully。
10. He said :\"Nothing serious.\" And he told me to take a rest and drink more water。 11. A nurse gave me an injection. It was a little painful。 12. The doctor asked me to take the medicine three times a day。
13. A few days later, I felt better. From then on I believe that keeping healthy is the most important thing in the world。
近年来，中小学生健康问题日益引起人们的关注。请你用英语就该问题谈谈你的看法。
要求：（1）内容包括①列举中小学生面临的健康问题。 ② 请谈谈怎样才能保持健康。 （2）字数：60---80词。
（3）短文中不得出现你的真实姓名、学校名和地名。
范文：Every one wants to keep healthy today, especially our students. But we don’t pay attention
to our health. Some of them go to school without breakfast in the morning. Some students and pupils play computer games or watch TV all day, especially at the weekends. Many boys think it is cool to drink or smoke.
It is important for us to have good habits. We should eat breakfast every morning. We can watch TV or play games for a short time, then have a rest. We also can take part in some clubs. I
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think it is necessary for us to keep healthy.
六. 关于环境保护问题
环境保护问题是中考热门话题，出现频率高，难度较大，必须掌握。 典型句子
1. It’s our duty to save water
2. As we know , water is very important to man, 3.we can’t live without water.
4.The amount of water which is suitable to drink is less and less. 5.But some people don’t care about it . 6.Many rivers and lakes are seriously polluted. Something must be done to stop the pollution. 7. It’s our duty to protect our environment。 8. It is very important to take care of our environment 9. We should not throw litter onto the ground
10. We should not spit in a public place/ cut down the trees 11. We should plant more flowers and trees。
12. We must pick up some rubbish and throw it into a dustbin
13. If everyone makes contribution to protecting the environment, the world will become much more beautiful。
15.Trees are very helpful and important for us.
17.We should plant more and more trees in order to live better and more healthy in the future. It’s everyone’s duty to love and protect the environment. 例文:
1.保护环境是每一个人的职责。请你写一篇以“Lower Carbon(低碳),Happier Life”为题的英语短文。短文要点如下：
自己走路或骑自行车上学，父母骑车上班；（ride a bike, on foot） 节约用水，用电；（save, turn off, electricity）
将用过的课本留给低年级学生；（old books, next grade students） 购物时带上篮子，别用塑料袋。（basket, plastic bags）
要求：1.词数：80个左右。文章开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2.必须包括全部要点，但不能逐词翻译； 3.在文中不要提及真实的校名和姓名。
Lower carbon, happier life .It’s our duty to protect the environment…. Lower carbon, happier life. Let’s take actions.
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It’s our duty to protect the environment. The environment is becoming worse and worse, we
must do something to prevent people from polluting the environment. First, we can ride to school or go to school on foot and tell our parents to walk to work instead of driving the car. Second, we should save water and electricity by turning off the taps and lights in time when we don’t need them. Third, give the old books to the next grade students if we don't use them any more. By doing this, we can save many trees. At last, remember to go shopping with basket rather than plastic bags. I believe our life will become better and better if we can do these things.
Lower carbon, happier life. Let’s take actions.
2.地球是我们人类共同的家园。“低碳、环保”已成为当今时代主题。目前，我市英语学会准
备在全市中学生中开展以“Save(拯救）our earth”为主题的英文征文活动。现请你根据以下三个方面的提示，写一篇70词左右的短文参评。 1.重要性：只有一个地球 2.主要问题：污染、疾病、灾难 3.措施：停止污染、保护大自然
参考词汇：disaster n.灾难 protect V. 保护 注意：(1)文中不能出现真实姓名、校名； (2)文章标题已给出，但不计入总词数； (3)可适当发挥，以使行文连贯。 Let’s Do Something to Save Our Environment
It is recently reported that some rivers and lakes have dried up in South China. A lot of fishes died. The bottoms of the rivers and lakes have become grass land. The water is becoming less and less because of the bad weather.
So everyone should do something to save our environment. First, we should save every drop of water, such as turning off the taps after using it and recycling the water. For example, we can water the plants and clean the rest room with our used water. Second, we should save energy, such as less turning on the lights and turning off the lights when we leave；do more walking, more bicycling and less driving and so on. Third, we should ask our government to control the pollution from the factories.
Let’s act now from everything to save our environment. Don’t let our tears be the last drop of water in the world!
3. 环境问题：今天环境变得越来越糟糕,环境问题影响着人们的工作,学习,生活等,而我们的
工作,生活,生产等又使环境污染越来越严重..........,如何保护我们的环境?请以“ How to protect/save our environment/world? ”为题写一篇短文。提示:存在问题:1.水污染越来越严重 2.砍伐森林严重 3. 大气污染严重 4. 白色垃圾等。 要求：如何改善/保护环境?至少:3---4个
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方面， 80字左右的。
范文：
How to protect/save our environment/world?
The environmental pollution is worse and worse /more and more seriously today . Water is polluted ,we have no clean water to drink Many trees are cutting down, some animals is getting less and less. Some factories is poring dirty air in the sky , the population is increasing faster and faster ,resources is getting less and less…etc. Not only does it affect our lives and health, it also has a great affection in the future. People’s health has been greatly affected by air, noise and water pollution. Many people died of diseases. In order to live a better life, we need protect our world.
We shouldn’t throw away rubbish everywhere. We want to recycle, reduce, reuse things .Don’t waste things ,This saves money and reduces pollution. Use things for as long as possible. We don’t use plastic bags. We must plant more trees and stop the people cutting them .We hope our world is more and more beautiful.
七. 语言学习
这是中考中的老话题，近几年常考，形式多样。典型例句: 1. My favorite subject is English。
2. More than three quarters of the information on the Internet is in English。 3. It is used by travelers and business people all over the world。
4. China has joined the WTO and the Olympic Games will be held in China. English becomes more and more useful。
5. So English is very important and I like English very much。 6. We have a lot of fun in the English class。
7. Our English teacher often makes us happy in the English class。
8. I hope I can go abroad one day, and then I can speak to foreigners in English。 9. I like English and try my best to learn it。 例文
1. 假如你是张华，你的加拿大朋友Dave来信向你了解学习汉语的方法，清根据以下要点用英语写封回信。除以下外再提出一条建议。
要点：1.加入汉语班学习，可向老师学习并与同学练习汉语； 2.看中文电视、读中文书、报纸、杂志； 3.听、唱汉语歌，有助于汉语词汇； 4.交中国朋友，即可练习口语又可了解中国。
要求：1.要点齐全，可适当发挥；80词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
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2.文中不能出现自己的地址、姓名及所在学校名称。
Dear Dave,
I’m glad to get your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well. Here is
my advice. First, As a foreign, you need to go and join a Chinese learning activity group, the3 most important thing is to remember as many Chinese words as possible.
Second, if you want to improve your listening ability, you’d better read Chinese books,
listen to the tapes and radio programs in Chinese. You can watch the Chinese TV programs or DVDs.
Third, you make some Chinese friends. Your friends can teach you a lot of Chinese songs
and introduce some Chinese festivals to you, too. I think we will have a good time .write to me soon. Yours
Zhang Hua
2014一模 西城区
十、文段表达（15分）
根据中文和英文提示，写一封意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于50词的回信。信的开头和结尾已给出，其词数不计入所要完成的回信内。所给提供的英文提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
假如你叫李明，你的笔友David要来北京旅行。他给你发来邮件，想了解北京的情况。请你根据他的问题回复邮件。
提示词语: the Summer Palace, the Great Wall, amazing, fantastic, crowed
1. When is the best time to visit Beijing? 2. What are some good places to visit in Beijing? 3. What other things do I need to know about Beijing before I come?
One possible version:
Hi! David,
I’m glad to hear from you. The best time to come to Beijing is during the Spring. The weather is not too hot or too cold, so it is the perfect time of the year to be outside. During the Spring in
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Beijing everything seems fresh and new. I advise you to visit the Summer Palace, the Great Wall, and the Temple of Heaven. The Great Wall is one of the wonders of the world and it is an amazing place to visit. The Summer Palace and the Temple of Heaven are beautiful too. There are royal buildings , fantastic artwork, and scenic views for people to enjoy. Before you come to Beijing, you should know that Beijing is a very crowded and big city. So it is necessary for you to travel with a map and you must be patient about waiting in line or large crows. I hope you will have a nice trip.
Yours,
三、西城二模
假如你叫李明，你的笔友David给你写信，想了解你在学校丰富多彩的校园活动，请根据他的问题回信
提示词：volunteer,competition,club,prepare,helpful,teamwork,understand 1. What ctivities do you have at your school？ 2. 2.What is your favourite school activity like? 3. 3.Why do you like it? One possible version:
Hi!David,
It is good to learn about your school activities.Now I’ll tell you about mine.
At my school we have many fun activities to take part in,such as swimming, playing basketball,badminton,and ping pong.Of all the activities,I like basketball best.I play with my friends every day after school.Basketball is a team sport where team-mates pass the ball to each other to throw it into a hoop for points.The team with the most points at the end of the game wins.In basketball it is good to be tall,because it is easier to score points.
I like to play basketball because it is not only a team sport but also a good way to get exercise.Basketball is also a good game to learn how to work well with others.I like it very much .
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